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◎等待另一场雪点亮黑暗

邵鹏飞
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Joined: 21 Oct 2007
Posts: 25

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Posted: 2007-12-09 20:02:44 Post subject: ◎等待另一场雪点亮黑暗

◎等待另一场雪点亮黑暗诗/邵鹏飞沿着你背身离去的方向，一场雪正静心酝酿另一场暴动街灯幽暗，露出夜空忐忑的心跳每一阵风过，都会有空气跑动的声响落下，像一股电流，在神经最脆弱的一刻击中要害，让人寝食难安沿着你背身离去的方向，一场雪等待另一场雪点亮黑暗 2007.12.10于烟台。 _________________ 博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/shaopengfeipoet

迪拜
同进士出身

Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588

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Posted: 2007-12-09 20:57:00 Post subject:

写的非常不错 “平静中的激荡” “让人寝食难安”最好删除

赵福治
探花

Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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Posted: 2007-12-13 03:49:44 Post subject:

沿着你背身离去的方向，一场雪等待另一场雪点亮黑暗。。。。。。有穿透。

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