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《在汽车上》

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-12-17 05:26:45 Post subject: 《在汽车上》

《在汽车上》这些奔跑的树木和房屋它们的速度超过了汽车在黄昏它们从我身边掠过拼命追赶我身后缓缓沉落的夕阳而我只能怀着巨大的失落和悲悯像一个失去马群的牧人 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2007-12-17 06:58:06 Post subject:

相对论应用的不错，学习～问好海军！

司马策风
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Joined: 03 Dec 2006
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Posted: 2007-12-17 18:38:08 Post subject:

因为最后两句,诗歌开始出味. 久不见.问候 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Posted: 2007-12-17 19:15:29 Post subject:

阅！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Posted: 2007-12-17 19:43:14 Post subject:

诗歌透着淡淡的忧伤. 问好海军.

照夜
童生

Joined: 09 Dec 2007
Posts: 37

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Posted: 2007-12-18 05:01:42 Post subject:

瞬间的情绪随着时空变换。。。。。。。。问好楼主。。。 _________________ 潮起潮落，酌一杯风云；花开花谢，品半盏日月。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/banjiangyuhuo5

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