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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 05:06:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

刘浪 wrote:
Embarassed 俺也凑个热闹


那怕只剩下一张白纸
也要用铅云的字版把它印满
将这封信函塞进08的背包
看它背影渐行渐远-------

信中说端茶倒水也蛮辛苦的
刚好有杯温热的白水,就着剩蛋
还算悠闲........
信中事1001夜也说不完,留白处
更是只可意会不可言传

眼下,我们也正收拾行囊
钟一响,就要踏上
2009这条贼船
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是金子也会 花 光地

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踏上
2009这条贼船
你就是阿里巴巴, 键盘叮咚
芝麻开门
千万吨面粉洒下来

我说, 手捧火柴的女孩儿
再擦亮一根吧
那是不熄的希望之火啊
为你照亮盗宝的路


Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 05:25:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

孬不好 wrote:
七绝 叠韵奉和

游波难再觅谁羞,寸折消魂赖海鸥。
只怕此时断肠客,不同载酒泛溪舟。


...


MM好诗才
白兄只好临屏勉强接招了 Embarassed

七绝 叠韵奉和

难择佳句自含羞, 远目平湖问海鸥
靓妹瑶池踏浪至, 白兄踉跄醉兰舟
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 07:37:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

佳句难择偶难求,举杯邀月月含羞
瑶池七妹今何在,水牛横笛对孤舟
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 08:05:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

为你照亮盗宝的路
我的左脚还留在去年
我的右脚就快要踩着明年了
而中间的那一截呀是空的
一片白花花的雪
白得见不着底的雪
你划着一根火柴
你又划着一根火柴
你说你看到了堆积如山的银子
而圣诞老人叮叮噹噹的
从我的键盘踩过去
一路的欢快一路的轻歌
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 09:01:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

文采飞扬何惧羞,绣球上网等郎收。
三难秦少苏家妹,明月云波作扁舟。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 09:18:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈, PEACE, QINGHONGH 你们来了真好. 白水习武不精, 踉跄接招, MM们看不上又不忍杀生, 我得趁机快逃 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 10:40:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
哈, PEACE, QINGHONGH 你们来了真好. 白兄习武不精, 踉跄接招, MM们看不上又不忍杀生, 我得趁机快逃 :D :D


白水大侠也有怯阵的时候

偶是无知者无畏
:D
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 16:39:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:

为你照亮盗宝的路
我的左脚还留在去年
我的右脚就快要踩着明年了
而中间的那一截呀是空的
一片白花花的雪
白得见不着底的雪
你划着一根火柴
你又划着一根火柴
你说你看到了堆积如山的银子
而圣诞老人叮叮噹噹的
从我的键盘踩过去
一路的欢快一路的轻歌


一路的欢快一路的轻歌
使我想起从前
——骑着破车
也没觉得苦
反而挺快活
而今倒是
——开着四轮车
也没觉着乐
反而挺忙活
圣诞老人打我这儿过
留下一包礼物
我说,礼物你拿走
把你的悠闲给我留下
他乐了
洒下——
一路的欢快一路的轻歌
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 17:15:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

够乐, 晓松好心态. Very Happy

和一个:

一路的轻快一路的轻歌
让我们击节
而舞
荡漾在美丽的银河

TORONTO还在下雪
一只只粉蝶飘下来
从我的掌心
滴滴滚落

秋叶来电
说他家的后院已经堆起白色的北极
我问可是太多的
水晶珠宝? Wink
他说
这是点燃的
诗歌(又一个好心态的, 恭喜发财)

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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 17:20:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
哈, PEACE, QINGHONGH 你们来了真好. 白兄习武不精, 踉跄接招, MM们看不上又不忍杀生, 我得趁机快逃 Very Happy Very Happy


白水大侠也有怯阵的时候
偶是无知者无畏
Very Happy

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继续无畏 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 17:28:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

点燃的诗歌,
来自流淌的心河,
一路澎湃,
陪我们把难熬的岁月度过。
即将过去的一年,
把人们折磨太多,
甚至实在不愿,
勾起回忆,
只想快些听到,
明年的新歌。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 17:34:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

goldhere you arethanks
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 17:43:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

只想快些听到,
明年的新歌。

昨天夜晚
你可听见圣诞的钟声?
他将替你我背负
苦痛的回忆
太沉



让我们轻身
把灵魂交给窗外那片
白色的雪花, 侧耳
倾听, 倾听瑶池的鱼儿
唱歌
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 18:17:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
够乐, 晓松好心态. Very Happy
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借几位宝号一用, 步韵和上一首,并祝各位圣诞快乐!

逸峰岩下挂松枝, 疏竹横斜引我痴。
最是馋人歪不正, 豆浆豆腐拌为诗。

竹 ,不 -入声
秋叶

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随兴 (步韵打油、奉和艺芳)

逸峰

夜来盈雪抑冬枝,
逝水流云惹客痴。
夕照残红申本色,
从心碎语拌油诗。

(2008年12月21日)
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艺芳《七绝 闲情》原玉:

桃红初放两三枝,
翠柳依依弄舞痴。
独坐小亭吟暮色,
一行白鹭晚来诗。


秋叶兄佳节快乐。

打油口子一开就豁出去了!

残冬送岁雪盈枝,
秋叶染山人易痴。
高手抡锋歪迩正,
宜将豆腐泡新诗。

逸峰
2008年12月24日
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 19:37:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
够乐, 晓松好心态. Very Happy
...


借几位宝号一用, 步韵和上一首,并祝各位圣诞快乐!
...

七绝 打油和歪不正

歪歪正正几花枝,好好孬孬说到痴。
去去来来多少次,行行句句尽成诗。

歪不正原玉:

脱冰披雪两三枝,羞点娇容也有痴。
勾兑香油成一色,煎烹豆腐味滋诗。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 20:36:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
哈, PEACE, QINGHONGH 你们来了真好. 白水习武不精, 踉跄接招, MM们看不上又不忍杀生, 我得趁机快逃 Very Happy Very Happy


看姐姐说的,弄得我们跟杀手似的:)))
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 20:45:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

征尘载袖 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
哈, PEACE, QINGHONGH 你们来了真好. 白水习武不精, 踉跄接招, MM们看不上又不忍杀生, 我得趁机快逃 :D :D


看姐姐说的,弄得我们跟杀手似的:)))


更多的是动力

我的几招打油诗
都是回你们的帖练出来的
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 21:55:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

老大,你的打油诗跟顺口溜差不多:)))
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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 21:58:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

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七绝 打油和歪不正

歪歪正正几花枝,好好孬孬说尽痴。
去去来来多少次,行行句句皆成诗。

歪不正原玉:

脱冰披雪两三枝,羞点娇容也有痴。
勾兑香油成一色,煎烹豆腐味滋诗。



七绝 步韵奉和

乞声听唱一牵枝,荡气回肠仅入痴。
莫怨妹儿歪不正,沙龙几语胜千诗。


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PostPosted: 2008-12-26 22:08:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

也說個舊金山的

二更夢醒樹枝白
零雨階前水墨開
零藉盆栽零瘁葉
八荒八海誓春來

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