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笑聊
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Posted: 2010-07-27 06:38:27 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

接庆红的
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谢谢老师鼓励，问夏安！顺接：

出刊作品品皆香，北美人才挤满堂。
满腹诗文成七彩，九天长虹落御章。

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Posted: 2010-07-27 16:32:06 Post subject:

接笑聊的：九天长虹落御章，北美枫林叶叶香。我藏几缕慰诗魂，蓉城独自拜草堂。 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2010-07-27 16:59:28 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

接笑聊的：
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蓉城四季有花香，古迹还推圣草堂。
得便瞻仰容貌去，低吟浅唱颂华章。

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Posted: 2010-07-27 17:15:26 Post subject:

低吟浅唱华章颂，短叹长吁拜圣堂。唐宋诗词去不返，疗伤国誉谁承当？ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2010-07-29 01:27:28 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

低吟浅唱华章颂，短叹长吁拜圣堂。
唐宋诗词去不返，疗伤国誉谁承当？

诗词曲赋咏留香，亦步亦趋登上堂。
无力回天何必怨，春风自渡化诗章。

昨天忙了一天，回家后特累，故没有回复，见谅！

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Posted: 2010-07-29 16:59:43 Post subject:

春风自渡化诗章，细看明清偶有香。待到解放有润芝，一枝独秀未提倡。 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-07-31 00:56:24 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

春风自渡化诗章，细看明清偶有香。
待到解放有润芝，一枝独秀未提倡。

齐放百花万世香，单枝独秀一言堂。
共和民主潮流去，几见大头史抒章？

注：大头，袁世凯。

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Posted: 2010-07-31 01:30:16 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

山城子 wrote:

春风自渡化诗章，细看明清偶有香。
待到解放有润芝，一枝独秀未提倡。

齐放百花万世香，单枝独秀一言堂。
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燃支黄果也喷香，雨后凉风乐穿堂。
喜看笑聊来和诗，为山细论美华章。
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诗是人生的雅伴儿。

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-07-31 01:57:35 Post subject:

稍作休息，晚饭后继续。

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Posted: 2010-07-31 05:06:03 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

山城子 wrote:

春风自渡化诗章，细看明清偶有香。
待到解放有润芝，一枝独秀未提倡。

齐放百花万世香，单枝独秀一言堂。
...

燃支黄果也喷香，雨后凉风乐穿堂。
...

休闲莫若去寻香，名贵娇花捧入堂。
北美诗情多浪漫，风光自此记华章。

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Posted: 2010-07-31 18:32:42 Post subject:

排排叫卖菜蔬香，早市归来摆满堂。雨水丰盈农事乐，自兹小康入文章。 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2010-08-01 05:22:15 Post subject:

诗情折曲也传香，满腹回还进锦堂。平仄不须多费力，轻车熟路自成章。问好老师夏安！

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Posted: 2010-08-01 16:52:06 Post subject:

饭后茶余品句香，香扬国粹粹临堂。堂中自有堂中韵，韵致精灵是圣章。 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2010-08-01 19:02:42 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

饭后茶余品句香，香扬国粹粹临堂。
堂中自有堂中韵，韵致精灵是圣章。

同老师唱和，感觉很好！谢谢并和：

阳春白雪句传香，下里巴人也上堂。
共赏雅俗同一室，齐心奋力抒新章。

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Posted: 2010-08-02 17:52:48 Post subject:

餐后津回晚宴香，两人品味在餐堂。散步黄昏犹未尽，归宿闲闲句入章。 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2010-08-03 01:04:10 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

餐后津回晚宴香，两人品味在餐堂。
散步黄昏犹未尽，归宿闲闲句入章。

诗雅酒醇品味香，香荷入赋有名堂。
堂风卷去烦心热，热汗淋来惬意章。

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Posted: 2010-08-03 22:09:07 Post subject:

谢笑聊！——续和：《走进农家》走进农家有果香，梨树恰好面厅堂。坐下桑麻道不尽，潺潺流水入诗章。 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2010-08-04 01:58:20 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

谢笑聊！——续和：《走进农家》
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农家游乐数稼樯，未完、、、

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-08-04 04:06:39 Post subject:

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山城子 wrote:

谢笑聊！——续和：《走进农家》
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《走进农家》并和：

戏乐农家数稼樯，亲为亲历下厨堂。
更生自立小康富，新屋新车新嫁娘。

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Posted: 2010-08-04 16:40:05 Post subject:

谢谢笑聊！再续和《山野刺梨》：山野丛丛刺梨香，采来蒸过备厨堂。高粱酒泡一年后，敬你十杯论美章。 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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