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晓松
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Joined: 26 Feb 2007
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Posted: 2007-08-13 20:43:34 Post subject:

[quote="满汗全溪"]

晓松 wrote:

满汗全溪 wrote:

狗肉搜来挂柳枝，——清才雅态绣囊词。

新朋友，欢迎一个！

谢谢晓松老师！我就是白水姐姐要搜的狗肉中的一块。但是，白水姐姐这样做很难找到我们，因为：一、我们在不同的论坛基本上不重复使用一个马甲；二、我们基本上不在两个以上论坛发表同一个作品，嘻``

老师二字我接受前一半。
你们七仙女都来才好，那时北美枫就成了天堂了。再让岛主张罗一桌满汉全席~

又一方天
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Joined: 16 Nov 2006
Posts: 385

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Posted: 2007-08-14 02:40:20 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

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溪满荷香拂旧泪, 樱唇微启吐清词
素绫抖落瑶池果, 又盗蟠桃有几枝?
MM, 久不见,回来就溪满荷香, 口吐仙桃, 猜想是到瑶池溜哒了一圈, 给朋友们兜了些好吃的回来. 丢丢来过, 又去玩儿了, 盼她早去早归, 别跑丢了 Very Happy

再和白水:

依依暂别不弹泪，
吟月举杯吐壮词。
情字压舟飞琼浪，
浪溅碧桃发新枝。
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满汗全溪
童生

Joined: 12 Aug 2007
Posts: 56

满汗全溪Collection

Posted: 2007-08-14 15:38:11 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

海南丢 wrote:

鼻涕一抽两行泪，双唇颤动未沾词。
封题相寄终成恨，蓦地伤心剪作枝。

海南丢调皮没边儿，能写好偏不正经写，第一句那叫什么诗？不雅，也不美。

晓松老师说的有道理。

小蹄子丢丢的起承两句和转合两句给人一种天壤之别的感觉，是她水平不够吗？明眼人一看就会明白是为什么。我问过小蹄子，她说她是故意的，不是因为离别之情，也不是为了勾起白水姐姐伤心，而是……

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2007-08-14 17:59:13 Post subject:

又一方天 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

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再和白水:

依依暂别不弹泪，
吟月举杯吐壮词。
情字压舟飞琼浪，
浪溅碧桃发新枝。

谢谢和诗. 问好

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2007-08-14 18:00:39 Post subject:

满汗全溪 wrote:

晓松 wrote:

海南丢 wrote:

鼻涕一抽两行泪，双唇颤动未沾词。
封题相寄终成恨，蓦地伤心剪作枝。

海南丢调皮没边儿，能写好偏不正经写，第一句那叫什么诗？不雅，也不美。

都是JJ不好.

满汗全溪
童生

Joined: 12 Aug 2007
Posts: 56

满汗全溪Collection

Posted: 2007-08-15 03:47:19 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

都是JJ不好.

姐姐怎么不好了，没什么不好的 question

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2007-08-15 20:13:16 Post subject:

满汗全溪 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

都是JJ不好.

姐姐怎么不好了，没什么不好的 question

JJ好还把丢丢丢了

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