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PostPosted: 2007-12-26 14:32:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

下一个首句:

朝向远方
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 03:29:10    Post subject: 《等 待》 Reply with quote

朝向远方--
远方的列车
正鸣叫着疾驰而来

冷硬的铁轨
疲惫的枕木
已在暗中颤动

朝向远方--
远方的朋友
正乘列车如约而来

身边的桉树
周围的群山
都在翘首等待
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 11:24:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

朝向远方
也有迷茫,
也有对未知的期待
脚步匆匆是时光的节奏
这节奏吟唱苦涩,
也讴歌欢乐

我不停的追问
追问是对将来的渴望
就在探索里确定了目标
就在奔跑中融合岁月
岁月的歌永不休止
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 19:13:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

请以“都在翘首等待”接续。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 19:42:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

都在翘首等待
对未来憧憬
绘就锦绣前程
哦,有时光留下的疲惫
有温馨回首
这些都如歌般玄妙
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 21:36:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

都在翘首等待
五环的旗帜
团结,力量,太阳

沉默的东方让人惊叹
谁的2008,谁的奥运
我们正在实现一个梦想
奥运中国,奥运东方
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PostPosted: 2007-12-28 23:34:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

〈都在翘首等待〉
湖北 荷梦

都在翘首等待
干枯的茎,化泥的叶,还有那
淤泥中的藕节

“冬天,冬天过去了吗?”
插入深泥的铁铲
抽出一根根绵延的问讯

回答不用谈季节,说轮回
我们只说风,说雪
说那个绿绿的梦
正雪藏着,却不曾冬眠
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PostPosted: 2007-12-29 03:34:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

浙江 蝶雨馨兰

都在翘首等待
鸽子飞过窗前?

古道西风中
落叶一牵手
牵出一篓紫丁香的忧伤

月光化了一座冰山
手指不再冰冷
春天的邮戳盖住一场雪
温柔了一池碧水
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PostPosted: 2007-12-30 22:06:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

荷梦。请告知你所在的城市。
下面请以“却不曾冬眠”接续。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-30 23:31:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

上海 照夜

却不曾冬眠
每一根神经都延伸在风中
谁在呢喃耳语
谁在触摸尘埃 过去和未来
抖落一闭眼的思念
杨柳依依 河岸依然
青翠欲滴

收集这个季节的温暖
把枯涩的思绪蔓延
用野火的热情
席卷 离离荒原
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PostPosted: 2007-12-31 19:24:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

却不曾冬眠
娇弱的倩影
似无力把严寒低档
那红色显现的温暖的春光
一种盼望,一种遐思
流传在千古诗韵
或许是歌者的理想

哦,曼妙的梅
并没有任何灵魂与奇念
就这样歌了多少代
多少代在诗幻中畅想遨游
遨游柔和而坚韧
似水绵软
却能克刚
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PostPosted: 2008-01-01 06:25:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

卻不曾冬眠,
愛的渴望,
在蕭疏的林間不時起舞;
寒風又奏起了怨曲。
不久前的一場山火,
把一半山頭燒成了焦土,
但第一場雪的降落,
會覆蓋一切。
在那素色世界
回憶青蔥歲月,
夢想花季的來臨,
需要更淡定的夜曲演奏者。
風兒呀,你能否勝任?

呵呵,新年的第一首詩! Wink
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PostPosted: 2008-01-01 06:40:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

下面请以“風兒呀,你能否勝任”接续。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-01 10:59:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

風兒呀,你能否勝任
我有疑问,疑问的玄机
或许没有答案
疑问问了许久

但我不会停留
永远追寻着光阴
回首只是梳理思绪
继续的脚步,却依如往昔
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PostPosted: 2008-01-02 01:07:36    Post subject: 風兒呀,你能否勝任? Reply with quote

漂之雨/上海

風兒呀,你能否勝任
守着这莫名的期待
掌一寸指尖的阳光
如果,你能带我去一个
渺无人烟的地方
即使水 冲没了原野
冲没人间的彷徨
冲没你的身影
可我依旧能感受到
你生命的翅膀
引航宇宙的沉思
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PostPosted: 2008-01-03 02:53:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

廣州, 姚夢痕

風兒呀,你能否勝任
希望的翅膀之重量
云朵呀,你可曾憧憬
蜃樓中的花朵早已如夢
我日復一日地等候
千百世前你投在我心窩
種子,一顆
或者炸彈,我將引爆
我的愛,與死亡溝合
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PostPosted: 2008-01-03 04:12:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

湊一個 Confused Confused

舊金山. 伯夷

風兒呀,你能否勝任
這山的沉重
風兒呀,你能否勝任
這景的膠著

但黃昏裡
別把人家的炊煙
拂入袖裡
那僧侶的空語如鐘
等著它升上推敲

但夜裡
不要輕易哭泣, 根本
不要哭泣
那會頓悟一些迷途的花

黎明時
讓晨曦刺穿你的胸膛
我便化作無形的存在
與你同歸地平弦外
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PostPosted: 2008-01-03 04:47:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

下面请以“與你同歸地平弦外”接续。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-03 11:51:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

與你同歸地平弦外
聞一曲三弄幽雅
沉寂了所有的浮躁喧嘩
追尋歌者幽婉純淨靈魂
探問世間美的境界

也許一路充滿艱辛
既然選擇
面臨的只有堅定
不會責怪坎坷太多
淚水和怨語於事無補
那又何不笑對每一秒
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PostPosted: 2008-01-03 12:39:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

廣州, 姚夢痕

與你同歸地平弦外
守著這個夢,守著你
此刻, 是否誰也在星球的另一邊蹺首相盼?
等候,或者被黑暗吞沒
我的思念不能遭此滅頂之災

鳥喉,我的每個毛孔都張開
為你歌唱
一只蠶,蝸死在我的心中
我錦心繡口,僅為博你一笑

雪中的裸獸早已前行
他自以為是巨人或者侏儒
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