白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-19 20:34:08 Post subject: |
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俺想这中文的该是这样的
你哪儿来
空瞳
溶解了苍色天穹
放脱所有的欲恶
眼前
会是那个纯的身体
色即空
你何戒可承 |
哈, 这是你的英译汉版本, 感觉也不错  |
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Lake 举人

Joined: 09 Jan 2007 Posts: 1286
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Posted: 2007-09-20 09:55:57 Post subject: |
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the spoon is empty
sex is zero
everything visible is empty
everything seen is nothing
and
color is empty (nobody)
etc. etc. etc ...
 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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金金 进士出身

Joined: 08 Feb 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: 山东济宁 金金Collection |
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博弈 榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006 Posts: 4381 Location: SFO 博弈Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-26 00:51:31 Post subject: |
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interesting discussion!
how about simply
"looks are voids"
"voids are looks"
both nouns(look, void) will be better? in my view
looks <---> voids (has some opposite sense built in)
I think, the word "color" is more attribute-oriented; while
"looks", the word is more interactive (involves both the objective and subjective views of the existent); things exist
all appear with some looks, right?
but this girl could not exist in real life, only in an artist's dream and it
seems we, male or female, all like her, we all like a void beauty?  _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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jemmy 秀才

Joined: 06 Jun 2007 Posts: 414 Location: china jemmyCollection |
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William Zhou周道模 探花
Joined: 10 Jun 2007 Posts: 3950 Location: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-26 18:57:20 Post subject: |
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一说"色",多半从男性角度看女性;为什么? _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-04 17:55:13 Post subject: |
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Hi, Lake, 金金, 博弈, jemmy, William Zhou. thank you very much my friends.
博弈, thanks again for your suggestion
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博弈 榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006 Posts: 4381 Location: SFO 博弈Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-06 22:58:46 Post subject: |
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日昨在高雄看了电影。
有一群上海来的游客集体来看这电影,成了影外一景。(不知大陆放映不?)
之后,济济多士纷纷议论女主角的高乳头与小乳房。
对台湾女性隆乳风相当程度引起反思,小巧的美是对抗百年巨变的隐性觉醒?
满城黄金甲的对照?
个人赞许国人终于勇于在世界舞台呈现华人的身体,东方的性,欲,美在几幕点出。 _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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