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深度创作的意境与灵魂碰撞的火花------评杨海军的诗《东辽河断章》刘剑英

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杨海军
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Posted: 2007-07-21 16:17:06 Post subject:

枫华墨客 wrote:

很好的感觉，有弹性的句子，有穿透力的观察：

“幽怨的少妇坐在命运的风里
我看见棒槌不停地击打岁月的身体
不停地击打那件蓝褂子
当一个正午人们从河里打捞出她的尸体
我听见全村人的呜咽挤满了河”

河象我们的岁月，从一个女人身上流过，在棒槌的打击下，最后就成了一具尸体，随岁月漂走了，

能够感到那个感觉。好

非常感谢枫华墨客的赏读！望多交流！！祝好！！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

鲁齐
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Posted: 2007-07-22 19:30:02 Post subject:

枫华墨客 wrote:

苟同.
好诗歌.真挚的心声,土地的馨香.
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金金
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Posted: 2007-07-22 20:40:17 Post subject:

动静皆思，学习来了。祝贺！！：）！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-07-25 03:12:01 Post subject:

鲁齐 wrote:

枫华墨客 wrote:

苟同.
好诗歌.真挚的心声,土地的馨香.

谢鲁齐兄！！！问好！！！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
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Posted: 2007-07-25 03:12:02 Post subject:

鲁齐 wrote:

枫华墨客 wrote:

苟同.
好诗歌.真挚的心声,土地的馨香.

杨海军
进士出身

Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
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Posted: 2007-07-25 03:13:18 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

动静皆思，学习来了。

祝贺！！：）！

谢金金诗人！远握！！！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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