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溪语
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Posted: 2007-06-07 01:14:44 Post subject:

现在已是千里之外一片焚烧的浮云和看一眼就能滴落泪水的月光经典! _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

黑牙
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Joined: 03 Jun 2007
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Posted: 2007-06-07 01:20:36 Post subject:

这种情节，非在外的华人不能有此体会。 _________________ 有一个位置，我从来都没有找到。

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-06-07 01:23:12 Post subject:

文字功底深厚！佩服！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-06-07 06:58:45 Post subject:

司马策风 wrote:

此诗，作正解，不愧是大气磅礴，想象出色，语言精练的好诗；

如果结合 ”内急“来解，又是别样的幽默风趣。哈哈，笑一笑，十年少。有趣！

可当精华

一般来说， ”内急“这一类东西，是不应该上诗歌的，不雅呀

但在此诗里，是通过对比，50多年前的老华裔，他们的艰难困苦的岁月
而“我”现在，算是再次体验他们的生活，何其悲壮！

这才有，从家到国家，
看一眼月光，都要流泪的境界。

感谢朋友们的鼓励！

白水
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Posted: 2007-06-07 07:12:50 Post subject:

谈谈读诗感受吧. 初始, 我根本不想读这诗歌, 原因简单, 小心眼了一次, 我不喜欢起始的两个字. 后来有朋友要我读读, 时值恰好从一个会议回来, 会上遇一位在海外闯荡了4,50年的老人, 和我谈起他的感受, 酸甜苦辣, 寻根情结......读此诗歌及注解时着实感动了一回. 没想到感动之余我去读诗友的回帖, 当一个我没解出的谜被捅破, 一时真是哭笑不得. 恨不能立刻要求诗人把起始的两个字拿掉. 静心后细想. 这首诗, 应是含泪的笑, 或是笑中含泪. 一个人如果连人生最起码的权利都被限制, 这漂泊的孤独, 被歧视的无奈, 重压下的坚韧, 看似淡, 实则浓的乡思, 看似调侃,实则深沉的思索, 这笑已不是笑.

新华
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Posted: 2007-08-31 14:45:25 Post subject:

现在已是千里之外一片焚烧的浮云和看一眼就能滴落泪水的月光赤子之心之心非常感人。学习，远握。

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