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贴上往年旧作，并祝各位中秋快乐！

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Posted: 2011-09-13 09:58:38 Post subject:

贴上昨天写今年的一首，望赐教：七绝—中秋友聚自栽瓜豆满盆香，邀得诗朋共品尝。陈酿三巡吟旧作，初更话别已秋凉。 2011中秋得，别----入声

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Posted: 2011-09-13 10:03:59 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

再来赏读这首诗总能让人激动，尤其转结句：昔日知音存四海，何时泼墨再同酬？有对往事的回忆感觉淡淡的凄凉，有对今后诗友集聚的盼望。情深意厚，值得大书特书！
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谢谢笑聊兄，的确，诗友的情谊是最纯洁和美好的，共同的雅兴而不带一点商业成分，“但愿人长久，千里共婵娟”。

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Posted: 2011-09-14 10:17:09 Post subject:

调了二字，是否好些？狼藉杯盘由桌上，只留醉意伴欢愁。原来：三更寒舍月中秋，一泻银光入灶头。狼藉杯盘由桌上，只留醉意伴欢愁。

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