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PostPosted: 2011-01-10 21:38:14    Post subject: Reply with quote
连南河 wrote:
七律 读诗有感——和秋叶《回望2010》
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谢谢连兄和作，大作乐观多了。


“枫华园里寻香梦，北美风中看彩霞。” 您怎么知道《枫华园》？可惜现在已经“枫华园已成幽梦” Crying or Very sad
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PostPosted: 2011-01-10 21:59:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
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年年回望年年望， 处处寻家处处家。 Laughing Laughing Laughing


年年回望年年望， 处处寻家处处家。

哈哈，庆宏兄，真巧合，我原来的尾联曾经想用 “年年回望年年望， 四处无家四处家。”后来觉得合得不好。更是后来想起电影《舞台姐妹》有一唱词“年年卖唱年年唱， 处处无家处处家”，到时在老师们面前，就是跳到安大略湖都洗不清啊 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2011-01-10 22:02:09    Post subject: Reply with quote
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切磋琢磨；好诗好和。 Laughing Laughing


谢谢冰清老师，您学识渊博，请多指教。
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