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Posted: 2010-12-26 05:39:02 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

我感觉也很好，但看不懂。 Very Happy

不是吧，冲浪。好让我失望 Sad

这段送你，罚你读三遍 Wink

（二）
到北国许多年了
我诧异，你竟仍然打不开一朵雪花
六瓣的晶体

如果全方位审视
你会发现世界原本如此透明
透明的有如两极冰川
知道冷暖的，有企鹅，更有
北极熊

双节快乐

你的意思是说，世界本很简单，让我们搞复杂了。诗歌本很简单，让我搞深刻了。哈哈，我读诗总想透过纸来看，其实诗歌都在字面上。

是，冲浪，我写东西都很直白。
我觉得看待各种事物，用雪花的眼神就够了：纯洁（白）+ 视野（六瓣= 多方位），世界就会变得透明。企鹅，北极熊or whatever 不过是些生存适者。这样看问题，感觉会简单的多。
真遗憾你不在Toronto，今天一些诗友要来我家小聚，每次听这些人聊天，会学到许多东西。你是语文老师，如果你也在，当给大家带来许多新的见解。
问好。

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