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湮雨朦朦
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PostPosted: 2010-03-30 18:28:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

《暗物质》
无热必清粼
无光,而幽深
万有引力听说只作用于光与热交炽的星球
那些美妙绝伦的心心相印
月落



唯你轻身
轻身的自由自在
偷吻她的红唇,而她
却浑然不知
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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-03-31 20:31:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
《暗物质》

无热必清粼
无光,而幽深
万有引力听说只作用于光与热交炽的星球
那些美妙绝伦的心心相印
月落



唯你轻身
轻身的自由自在
偷吻她的红唇,而她
却浑然不知

——诗人就应当是暗物质!!!
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问好老师,我觉得物有万象,人有万类。诗人也有不同吧 Embarassed
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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-03-31 20:33:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

戴永良 wrote:
其实那些比翼的鸟儿
不过是一张张精美的摄影作品
如果转换成文本
就可以定格。
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maybe Wink
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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-03-31 20:35:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

子花 wrote:
提上明天阅读!!问候所有朋友


问好子花 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-03-31 20:40:56    Post subject: 鼻子下面是什么? Reply with quote

湮雨朦朦 wrote:
《暗物质》

无热必清粼
无光,而幽深
万有引力听说只作用于光与热交炽的星球
那些美妙绝伦的心心相印
月落



唯你轻身
轻身的自由自在
偷吻她的红唇,而她
却浑然不知


...


哈,湮雨
给你COPY点有趣的:
近日,美国“低温暗物质搜寻计划”项目组科学家研究指出,暗物质或许就存在于地球, 就在我们鼻子底下。
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子花
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PostPosted: 2010-04-01 00:48:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

每首都带点哲思在里面。
水清无鱼,一定
有它的道理--像这样的结尾,学习!!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-02 06:00:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

恩,白白姊妹,你这组是比以前的那些多了些思考和理性。诗歌本就来源于生活,平淡的日子,梳理一下思绪,让心安静下来,也是一种享受吧。
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PostPosted: 2010-04-02 07:59:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

水清无鱼,一定
有它的道理
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PostPosted: 2010-04-02 18:40:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

那么牛奶?母牛乳房之硕大
令人退避三舍

——看到白水风趣的一面。不喝牛奶就不喝罢了,偏偏怪罪乳房!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-02 19:54:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

你忐忑不安地看我,我
忐忑不安地看水
我知道
每天为我唱歌,此刻的你
一定是渴了

哄赶你不是,不哄赶也不是
亲爱,能不能不饮
你可听懂我说
水清无鱼,一定
有它的道理
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2010-04-03 17:24:13    Post subject: 暗物质 Reply with quote

暗物质能量最大。因为光都无法逃逸。

《暗物质》写得不错。

附帖一首:

《你的声音很好听》


桃花是露珠的耳朵
蓖麻叶是大地的耳朵
夜莺是梦的耳朵
云雀是
满天星是

天边的云朵是谁的耳朵
天边的云朵是我的耳朵

有什么能让旅人回头
你的声音
有什么能让痛苦安静
你的声音

如果还有更深邃、更无穷
更对称的
你的声音
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PostPosted: 2010-04-03 20:51:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

很沉很沉的......
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PostPosted: 2010-04-04 19:08:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

我读到的更多是洒脱、张力、哲思和境界!!! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-04-04 19:29:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

每首都带点哲思在里面。
水清无鱼,一定
有它的道理--像这样的结尾,学习!!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-04 20:26:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

一组好诗,欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2010-04-07 02:56:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

诉说上越来越强大,自觉,少了些……

水王,莫染上俗气,生活的斗争需要自觉……

也许说得不对,就这个感觉,真实感受

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PostPosted: 2010-04-08 02:46:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

生活很平淡,文字起波澜。欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-08 18:23:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

子花 wrote:
每首都带点哲思在里面。
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谢谢子花
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PostPosted: 2010-04-08 18:24:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

一品红 wrote:
恩,白白姊妹,你这组是比以前的那些多了些思考和理性。诗歌本就来源于生活,平淡的日子,梳理一下思绪,让心安静下来,也是一种享受吧。



问好一品红,你说是,平淡的日子,梳理一下思绪,让心安静下来,也是一种享受吧。
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PostPosted: 2010-04-08 18:27:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
那么牛奶?母牛乳房之硕大
令人退避三舍

——看到白水风趣的一面。不喝牛奶就不喝罢了,偏偏怪罪乳房!
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冲浪好,这话其实是我一个朋友的原话,被我抓进诗歌了 EmbarassedRazz
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