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悠子
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Posted: 2009-04-14 07:49:48 Post subject:

热闹啊，投降的，断气的，饮酒的，什么都有了

红袖添乱
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Posted: 2009-04-14 08:12:53 Post subject: 全和小孩子一样的贪玩~~~~哈哈哈~~

昨天我还在点群组里乱评 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-04-14 08:14:33 Post subject: 摁，好玩，快也加入进来

我附上那段诗晏小山《临江仙》一词。此词乃怀人之作，原词如下：梦后楼台高锁，酒醒帘幕低垂。去年春恨却来时。落花人独立，微雨燕双飞。　记得小苹初见，两重心字罗衣。琵琶弦上说相思。当时明月在，曾照彩云归。 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-04-14 08:57:31 Post subject:

弦上说相思我轻拨你的名字在一根幽梦难绝的幺弦上沈吟这相思如水的月夜不忍心你被落花的叹息惊醒 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-04-14 12:53:26 Post subject: 瞎折腾得

落地不开机我敲打书桌与一个默默不语的手机怄气在这寂静的夜里看我们谁先理谁 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-04-14 12:56:32 Post subject: 罗衣两重心

还没想好~~ 嘎嘎嘎嘎嘎~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-04-14 13:43:09 Post subject:

？落地不开机 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2009-04-14 13:48:49 Post subject:

我敲打水勺与一个默默不语的水缸怄气在这寂静的夜里看我们谁先埋了谁凑趣 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2009-04-14 14:09:48 Post subject:

红袖添乱 wrote:

落地不开机
...

得，我先开口，“你该给我充电了。。。” Laughing

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Posted: 2009-04-14 14:11:33 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

我敲打水勺
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?谁先埋了谁

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Posted: 2009-06-06 00:22:01 Post subject:

在雨中我与一朵梨花对视轻寒的薄暮我屏住呼吸不知谁会先吐气 _________________ 在剪梦堡寻找黄斌成 http://blog.creaders.net/LUKE/

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Posted: 2009-07-05 00:29:52 Post subject:

红袖添乱 wrote:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

深呼吸之后
与一群
黑白的文字对峙
这彩色的剧情中
每每是我
先行投降

舉起我雙手
高聲的叫"我認輸了!"
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詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2009-07-06 04:56:28 Post subject: 当时连题目都没看清楚，不只认输，还得认栽。

sfiawong wrote:

红袖添乱 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

深呼吸之后
与一群
黑白的文字对峙
这彩色的剧情中
每每是我
先行投降

举起我双手
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Posted: 2009-07-06 15:31:53 Post subject:

我更痛彻而快速地呼吸了几个回合为了跟上磅礴奔徙的霞光傍晚来得稍慢但光必消失我和火烧云渐渐互相坦然

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Posted: 2009-07-08 17:23:05 Post subject:

警察要来了。谁也赢不了。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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