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七律 - 香江歲暮

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秋叶
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Posted: 2013-07-23 07:41:12 Post subject:

戴玨 wrote:

香江歲暮

來往光陰行路迷，逶迤巷陌彩霓飛。
樓重峭谷疏車晚，星宿中天永夜稀。
徙倚經年猶拓落，伶俜歲暮欲何依。
秋冬物候更難覺，遙想鄉關雨雪霏。

注：
香江：香港
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久违了，大作甚妙，深含韵味，一向以来欣赏你的诗笔，下面和上几首同题旧作，望赐教：

七律－回望2009

送牛迎虎尚天寒，雾浸长河蜀道难。
澹泊功名循佛道，重游故国被贪婪。
才飞上海转珠海，更入云南下海南。
避处江湖尘垢远，人生如梦过烟岚。

七律－回望2010

世事如棋频变幻，夜残月落聚欢鸦。
春深百卉迎新雨，秋浅万林生淡霞。
欧美方舟仍漏洞，故园物价正飞车。
云舒云卷由它去，醉倚东篱伴落花。

“车”是旧韵，我一向是用旧声韵写的，关于新旧声韵的问题，我以前有一文“用新旧声韵写格律诗”论述过，应该是并行为好。

七律－回望2011

送兔迎龙又一巡，徘徊市道复艰辛。
常将碗缽多容饭，偶读诗书少入神。
对月衔觞循五柳，迎风冒雨走三秦。
人生贫富凭天定，不作东施总效颦。

冷雨
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Posted: 2013-07-31 19:59:32 Post subject:

问好！学习了！

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