hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2009-01-25 19:57:44 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
傻乐什么?但愿没人在牛年干出件惊天动地的牛事来, 也象迈克杰克逊那样把黄皮肤给漂白了 :wink: |
这辈子,皮肤是漂不白了
乡音无改鬓毛先白了
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-25 20:08:42 Post subject: |
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乡音无改鬓毛衰. 又来一首?接着写. 让我们开开眼
你这组思路挺好, 借古韵的古典美写现代诗, 互补互动. 只是我跟在你后面和诗有点不及思索,写的草了  |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2009-01-25 20:12:28 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
乡音无改鬓毛衰. 又来一首?接着写. 让我们开开眼:D
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你那里很晚了
好梦
有时间再玩
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-26 08:50:12 Post subject: |
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韩少君 wrote: |
辟哩叭啦的鞭炮
失望地捂紧儿时破洞的衣袋
那是哥哥冒失的二踢脚
炸漏了香甜的
糖果
花
生
亲切!二踢脚 ,还有麻雷子呢。哈哈,你们好热闹!从头发想起一道菜:拔丝地瓜-----
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问好少君. 这两首(算?)诗歌只是真实的记录. 一到春节长途电话很难拨通, 昨天一大早就拨, 好不容易拨通了婆婆家, 我母亲那儿却怎么也拨不通, 难免想起儿时的往事......
拔丝地瓜-----? 这边餐馆真没有,谗 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-26 08:58:05 Post subject: |
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hepingdao wrote: |
白水 Moonlight wrote: |
乡音无改鬓毛衰. 又来一首?接着写. 让我们开开眼
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你那里很晚了
好梦
有时间再玩
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谢谢,愿你牛年牛市(诗)牛气  |
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爱月 秀才

Joined: 12 Jun 2008 Posts: 250
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Posted: 2009-01-26 19:22:53 Post subject: |
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很喜欢《忙音》纯粹的一首,感觉到美好的气氛,结尾灵动形象。
一遍又一遍
急促的电话铃声
响起除夕
辟哩叭啦的鞭炮
失望地捂紧儿时破洞的衣袋
那是哥哥冒失的二踢脚
炸漏了香甜的
糖果
花
生 _________________ 诗歌、诗剧。以文会友。http://blog.sina.com.cn/juneraiyue112 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-27 04:58:33 Post subject: |
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谢谢爱月. 春节好  |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-27 11:22:12 Post subject: |
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白水班长新年好。不能有好吃的,就来馋我们 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-27 11:23:14 Post subject: |
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看来岛主都馋晕了 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-27 15:03:00 Post subject: |
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悠子 wrote: |
白水班长新年好。不能有好吃的,就来馋我们 |
问好悠子, 我最想吃的是你的那些天然营养保健食品. 盼你多贴些好文章  |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-27 15:04:05 Post subject: |
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他是被他自己的"离离原上草" 馋晕的 , 一边烹饪一边大嚼, 特牛 |
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赵福治 探花

Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-27 16:38:01 Post subject: |
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拨一串吉祥的号码
从除夕的清晨起飞
飞到大洋那边
用我饥饿的耳朵
听你唠叨
除夕晚宴让人流涎的菜单
....姐姐这2首诗意鲜活,别有味道. |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-27 18:11:25 Post subject: 这就对了,做牛吗。你可别对他弹琴哦 |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
他是被他自己的"离离原上草" 馋晕的 , 一边烹饪一边大嚼, 特牛 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-27 18:19:03 Post subject: |
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赵福治 wrote: |
拨一串吉祥的号码
从除夕的清晨起飞
飞到大洋那边
用我饥饿的耳朵
听你唠叨
除夕晚宴让人流涎的菜单
....姐姐这2首诗意鲜活,别有味道.
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谢谢你的鼓励, 问好春节. |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-27 18:21:03 Post subject: |
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悠子 wrote: |
白水 Moonlight wrote: |
他是被他自己的"离离原上草" 馋晕的 , 一边烹饪一边大嚼, 特牛 |
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悠子, 别
今年是牛年  |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2009-01-27 18:33:52 Post subject: |
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弹琴
用我饥饿的耳朵
听  _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-27 19:09:33 Post subject: |
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hepingdao wrote: |
弹琴
用我饥饿的耳朵
听  |
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轻风吹我衣 童生

Joined: 19 Aug 2008 Posts: 47 Location: 中国河北 轻风吹我衣Collection |
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晴宝儿 秀才

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Posts: 666
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Posted: 2009-01-27 22:42:29 Post subject: |
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感受年的心情,新春好! _________________ 晴宝儿 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-28 08:34:24 Post subject: 对很诗意的牛,这琴要常弹~ :) |
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hepingdao wrote: |
弹琴
用我饥饿的耳朵
听  |
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