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hepingdao
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Posted: 2009-01-25 19:57:44 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

傻乐什么?但愿没人在牛年干出件惊天动地的牛事来, 也象迈克杰克逊那样把黄皮肤给漂白了 :wink:

这辈子,皮肤是漂不白了
乡音无改鬓毛先白了
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Posted: 2009-01-25 20:08:42 Post subject:

乡音无改鬓毛衰. 又来一首?接着写. 让我们开开眼你这组思路挺好, 借古韵的古典美写现代诗, 互补互动. 只是我跟在你后面和诗有点不及思索,写的草了

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Posted: 2009-01-25 20:12:28 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

乡音无改鬓毛衰. 又来一首?接着写. 让我们开开眼:D
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你那里很晚了
好梦

有时间再玩
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Posted: 2009-01-26 08:50:12 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

辟哩叭啦的鞭炮
失望地捂紧儿时破洞的衣袋
那是哥哥冒失的二踢脚
炸漏了香甜的
糖果

花

生

亲切！二踢脚，还有麻雷子呢。哈哈，你们好热闹！从头发想起一道菜：拔丝地瓜-----
...

问好少君. 这两首(算?)诗歌只是真实的记录. 一到春节长途电话很难拨通, 昨天一大早就拨, 好不容易拨通了婆婆家, 我母亲那儿却怎么也拨不通, 难免想起儿时的往事......

拔丝地瓜-----? 这边餐馆真没有,谗 Razz

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Posted: 2009-01-26 08:58:05 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

乡音无改鬓毛衰. 又来一首?接着写. 让我们开开眼 Very Happy

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你那里很晚了
好梦

有时间再玩
Very Happy

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谢谢,愿你牛年牛市(诗)牛气 Very Happy

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Posted: 2009-01-26 19:22:53 Post subject:

很喜欢《忙音》纯粹的一首，感觉到美好的气氛，结尾灵动形象。一遍又一遍急促的电话铃声响起除夕辟哩叭啦的鞭炮失望地捂紧儿时破洞的衣袋那是哥哥冒失的二踢脚炸漏了香甜的糖果花生 _________________ 诗歌、诗剧。以文会友。http://blog.sina.com.cn/juneraiyue112

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Posted: 2009-01-27 04:58:33 Post subject:

谢谢爱月. 春节好

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Posted: 2009-01-27 11:22:12 Post subject:

白水班长新年好。不能有好吃的，就来馋我们

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Posted: 2009-01-27 11:23:14 Post subject:

看来岛主都馋晕了

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Posted: 2009-01-27 15:03:00 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

白水班长新年好。不能有好吃的，就来馋我们

问好悠子, 我最想吃的是你的那些天然营养保健食品. 盼你多贴些好文章 Very Happy

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Posted: 2009-01-27 15:04:05 Post subject:

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看来岛主都馋晕了

他是被他自己的"离离原上草" 馋晕的 , 一边烹饪一边大嚼, 特牛 Wink

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Posted: 2009-01-27 16:38:01 Post subject:

拨一串吉祥的号码从除夕的清晨起飞飞到大洋那边用我饥饿的耳朵听你唠叨除夕晚宴让人流涎的菜单 ....姐姐这2首诗意鲜活,别有味道.

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Posted: 2009-01-27 18:11:25 Post subject: 这就对了，做牛吗。你可别对他弹琴哦

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悠子 wrote:

看来岛主都馋晕了

他是被他自己的"离离原上草" 馋晕的 , 一边烹饪一边大嚼, 特牛 Wink

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Posted: 2009-01-27 18:19:03 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

拨一串吉祥的号码
从除夕的清晨起飞
飞到大洋那边
用我饥饿的耳朵
听你唠叨
除夕晚宴让人流涎的菜单
....姐姐这2首诗意鲜活,别有味道.

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谢谢你的鼓励, 问好春节.

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Posted: 2009-01-27 18:21:03 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

悠子 wrote:

看来岛主都馋晕了

他是被他自己的"离离原上草" 馋晕的 , 一边烹饪一边大嚼, 特牛 Wink

悠子, 别

今年是牛年

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Posted: 2009-01-27 18:33:52 Post subject:

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Posted: 2009-01-27 19:09:33 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

弹琴
用我饥饿的耳朵
听 Laughing

轻风吹我衣
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Posted: 2009-01-27 22:17:38 Post subject:

诗写得好，连灌水诗的水平也这么高，灌水都要灌出经典了！ _________________ 掸去世事纷纭只想以纤纤心丝织平一方世界 http://blog.sina.com.cn/xtrwwj

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Posted: 2009-01-27 22:42:29 Post subject:

感受年的心情，新春好！ _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2009-01-28 08:34:24 Post subject: 对很诗意的牛，这琴要常弹~ :)

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弹琴
用我饥饿的耳朵
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