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PostPosted: 2009-01-25 19:57:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
傻乐什么?但愿没人在牛年干出件惊天动地的牛事来, 也象迈克杰克逊那样把黄皮肤给漂白了 :wink:


这辈子,皮肤是漂不白了
乡音无改鬓毛先白了
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PostPosted: 2009-01-25 20:08:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

乡音无改鬓毛衰. 又来一首?接着写. 让我们开开眼Very Happy
你这组思路挺好, 借古韵的古典美写现代诗, 互补互动. 只是我跟在你后面和诗有点不及思索,写的草了 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2009-01-25 20:12:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
乡音无改鬓毛衰. 又来一首?接着写. 让我们开开眼:D
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你那里很晚了
好梦

有时间再玩
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PostPosted: 2009-01-26 08:50:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
辟哩叭啦的鞭炮
失望地捂紧儿时破洞的衣袋
那是哥哥冒失的二踢脚
炸漏了香甜的
糖果





亲切!二踢脚 ,还有麻雷子呢。哈哈,你们好热闹!从头发想起一道菜:拔丝地瓜-----
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问好少君. 这两首(算?)诗歌只是真实的记录. 一到春节长途电话很难拨通, 昨天一大早就拨, 好不容易拨通了婆婆家, 我母亲那儿却怎么也拨不通, 难免想起儿时的往事......

拔丝地瓜-----? 这边餐馆真没有,谗Razz
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PostPosted: 2009-01-26 08:58:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
乡音无改鬓毛衰. 又来一首?接着写. 让我们开开眼Very Happy
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你那里很晚了
好梦

有时间再玩
Very Happy

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谢谢,愿你牛年牛市(诗)牛气 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-01-26 19:22:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

很喜欢《忙音》纯粹的一首,感觉到美好的气氛,结尾灵动形象。


一遍又一遍
急促的电话铃声
响起除夕
辟哩叭啦的鞭炮
失望地捂紧儿时破洞的衣袋
那是哥哥冒失的二踢脚
炸漏了香甜的
糖果




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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 04:58:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢爱月. 春节好 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 11:22:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水班长新年好。不能有好吃的,就来馋我们
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 11:23:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

看来岛主都馋晕了
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 15:03:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

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白水班长新年好。不能有好吃的,就来馋我们


问好悠子, 我最想吃的是你的那些天然营养保健食品. 盼你多贴些好文章 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 15:04:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

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看来岛主都馋晕了


他是被他自己的"离离原上草" 馋晕的 , 一边烹饪一边大嚼, 特牛Wink
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 16:38:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

拨一串吉祥的号码
从除夕的清晨起飞
飞到大洋那边
用我饥饿的耳朵
听你唠叨
除夕晚宴让人流涎的菜单
....姐姐这2首诗意鲜活,别有味道.
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 18:11:25    Post subject: 这就对了,做牛吗。你可别对他弹琴哦 Reply with quote

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悠子 wrote:
看来岛主都馋晕了


他是被他自己的"离离原上草" 馋晕的 , 一边烹饪一边大嚼, 特牛Wink


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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 18:19:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
拨一串吉祥的号码
从除夕的清晨起飞
飞到大洋那边
用我饥饿的耳朵
听你唠叨
除夕晚宴让人流涎的菜单
....姐姐这2首诗意鲜活,别有味道.

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谢谢你的鼓励, 问好春节.
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 18:21:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

悠子 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
悠子 wrote:
看来岛主都馋晕了


他是被他自己的"离离原上草" 馋晕的 , 一边烹饪一边大嚼, 特牛Wink


Shocked


悠子, 别 Shocked
今年是牛年 Wink
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 18:33:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

弹琴
用我饥饿的耳朵
Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 19:09:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

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弹琴
用我饥饿的耳朵
Laughing


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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 22:17:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗写得好,连灌水诗的水平也这么高,灌水都要灌出经典了!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 22:42:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

感受年的心情,新春好!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-28 08:34:24    Post subject: 对很诗意的牛,这琴要常弹~ :) Reply with quote

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弹琴
用我饥饿的耳朵
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