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PostPosted: 2008-04-07 06:36:42    Post subject: 哦，点石成金？ Reply with quote
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
随便走走，金钱在我双手中滋长。
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PostPosted: 2008-04-07 07:29:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
红袖添乱 wrote:
我也写不出。。。和改也没啥关系~~~

这诗有改头。。很好看。


嗯，袖姐不要误会，我的意思是说，我个人觉得这首已经很完整了，悠子的意思好像还想继续写下去，没有说你改的不好，也没说你不应该改，希望不要引起误会。
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PostPosted: 2008-04-07 07:36:07    Post subject: 一次轻轻扑动的喜悦 Reply with quote
特别好
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PostPosted: 2008-04-07 09:28:35    Post subject: 不！是满手的铜臭味。 Reply with quote
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诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
随便走走，金钱在我双手中滋长。

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PostPosted: 2008-04-07 13:24:40    Post subject: 把手包起来 Reply with quote
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
悠子 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
随便走走，金钱在我双手中滋长。
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PostPosted: 2008-04-07 16:19:33    Post subject: Reply with quote
花言巧语却难掩牵手真情
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PostPosted: 2008-04-07 18:40:50    Post subject: Reply with quote
走走。。。
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