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PostPosted: 2008-01-14 20:54:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

解读得比我写的好 Laughing Laughing
功力不逮,真的很惭愧呢。前两句确实一点不差是你所讲的。写完了那两句,后面就难产了 Laughing Laughing
看你们都是跟冒泡似的一首接一首,我也就说俏皮话跟冒泡似的 Laughing Laughing
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PostPosted: 2008-01-14 20:55:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

莞君 wrote:
欣赏了 也祝贺您的生日 迟到的祝福


多谢莞君,虽然只是个虚构的生日,但祝福还是全部收下。这段日子以来,确实需要一点点祝福 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2008-01-15 03:20:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

北风呼呼的刮
雪花飘飘洒洒
突然传来了一声枪响
这匹狼他受了重伤
但他侥幸逃脱了
救它的是一只羊
从此它们约定三生
苦诉着衷肠

狼说亲爱的
谢谢你为我疗伤
不管未来有多少的风雨
我都为你去抗
羊说不要客气
谁让我爱上了你
在你身边有多么的危险
我都会陪伴你
就这样他们快乐的流浪
就这样他们为爱歌唱

狼爱上羊啊爱的疯狂
谁让他们真爱了一场
狼爱上羊啊并不荒唐
他们说有爱就有方向
狼爱上羊啊爱的风光
他们穿破世俗的城墙
狼爱上羊啊爱的疯狂
他们相互搀扶去远方

狼说亲爱的
谢谢你为我疗伤
不管未来有多少的风雨
我都为你去抗
羊说不要客气
谁让我爱上了你
在你身边有多么的危险
我都会陪伴你
就这样他们快乐的流浪
就这样他们为爱歌唱

狼爱上羊啊爱的疯狂
谁让他们真爱了一场
狼爱上羊啊并不荒唐
他们说有爱就有方向
狼爱上羊啊爱的风光
他们穿破世俗的城墙
狼爱上羊啊爱的疯狂
他们相互搀扶去远方

歌曲出处:http://www.wanan.gov.cn/media/mp3_2.mp3
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PostPosted: 2008-01-15 03:57:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

冲浪短信说那是流行歌曲叫狼爱上羊。音乐很美。还说我也不上街,满大街都放这首歌。

我我我,我们大街上从来没放过呀! Laughing
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PostPosted: 2008-01-15 05:29:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

冲浪, 这歌放不出来啊, 再贴一下行吗 Confused
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http://mp3.baidu.com/m?kw=&sc=mp3&cl=&tn=baidump3&ct=134217728&pn=&rn=&lm=-1&ie=gb2312&rs2=&myselectvalue=&f=ms&pv=&z=&from=&word=%C0%C7%B0%AE%C9%CF%D1%F2
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PostPosted: 2008-01-15 05:38:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢, 你好快手 Very Happy
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试一试,选一个长一点的,我正在听。
哈哈,没想到吧,狼和羊竟然谈上恋爱了,狼不再吃小羊了。音乐很美。
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这只是羊的幻想而已, 在幸福中死去 Wink

写歌词的一定是只羊
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PostPosted: 2008-01-15 05:55:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
这只是羊的幻想而已, 在幸福中死去 Wink

写歌词的一定是只羊

哈哈,听了么?现在狼少了,成了保护的动物,用不着吃羊了。
哈哈,即使不保护,但这狼只是狼的一匹,羊也是羊中的一只,
特殊性么,而且人家有因缘关系,不是无缘无故的爱。哈哈。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-15 16:28:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

谦卑的杯?找不到能换掉谦卑的词?

扭吧弟兄台!您何时移步赐教呢?
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PostPosted: 2008-01-15 16:32:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
半溪明月 wrote:
生日快乐,我该给你找个大蛋糕,可惜那些都是虚的,就不找了吧~
...


谢明月。那就虚糕虚吃吧 Laughing 我指的“那天“,是“东风与西风同路/狼挽着羊的手放学“的那天。。。也是虚的 Laughing
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应该清晨放飞一群白羊
这样多美好啊
羊总是多情而麻木,把狼视为朋友,被吃到肚里了还会感谢上天让它为爱献身~
这个狼不是杯中冲浪的浪哦.
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PostPosted: 2008-01-15 17:58:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
这只是羊的幻想而已, 在幸福中死去 Wink

写歌词的一定是只羊

哈哈,听了么?现在狼少了,成了保护的动物,用不着吃羊了。
...


是吗? 哈, 看来我们在国外的是跟不上形势了.
那你就再贴一首"我是一只来自北方的狼" Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-01-15 21:04:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
谦卑的杯?找不到能换掉谦卑的词?

扭吧弟兄台!您何时移步赐教呢?


谦卑是我最缺少的,换什么也不能换它 Laughing (这本身好像就不太谦卑啊哈 Laughing

马上就换台去你那里,今晚有空。罢工了。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-15 21:07:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:

应该清晨放飞一群白羊
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Laughing Laughing Laughing
下午看到就笑了半天了。

我都放飞了一只UFO了 Laughing
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白水 Moonlight wrote:
杯中冲浪 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
这只是羊的幻想而已, 在幸福中死去 Wink

写歌词的一定是只羊

哈哈,听了么?现在狼少了,成了保护的动物,用不着吃羊了。
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是吗? 哈, 看来我们在国外的是跟不上形势了.
...


那首歌听了。。。跟没听一样,还“很美”呢,没感觉。歌词写得不如白水冲浪,唱的只比博弈扭吧弟稍强
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谦卑的杯?找不到能换掉谦卑的词?

扭吧弟兄台!您何时移步赐教呢?


谦卑是我最缺少的,换什么也不能换它 Laughing (这本身好像就不太谦卑啊哈 Laughing
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真拗哪!这样用法,让我联想到一种游戏!

谦卑的卑呀
卑下的下呀
下上的上呀
上香的香呀
相等的等呀
等你的你呀
等你喔!
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那首歌听了。。。跟没听一样,还“很美”呢,没感觉。歌词写得不如白水冲浪,唱的只比博弈扭吧弟稍强[/quote]


我怎么说你是乐盲?你只会欣赏白雪,不懂巴巴。
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没人哪天唱一首镇一下冲浪 Very Happy
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白水 Moonlight wrote:
杯中冲浪 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
这只是羊的幻想而已, 在幸福中死去 Wink

写歌词的一定是只羊

哈哈,听了么?现在狼少了,成了保护的动物,用不着吃羊了。
...


是吗? 哈, 看来我们在国外的是跟不上形势了.
...



我是一匹来自北方的狼
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