博弈
榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006
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Location: SFO
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不忍"巢丝"
有意思.
胡馬依北風，越鳥巢南枝。
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2008-01-14 18:48:17 Post subject: |
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| 刘雨萍 wrote: |
白水，给你一个迟到的新年问候。很久没来，差点忘了登陆密码。刚才发送又搞错了。惭愧 
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雨萍, 久不见. 甚念.
问好新年 |
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白水
大学士
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Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2008-01-14 18:49:52 Post subject: |
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光顾玩笑了，诗还没看。
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没那么冷吧  |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2008-01-14 18:51:24 Post subject: |
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| 博弈 wrote: |
不忍"巢丝"
有意思.
胡馬依北風，越鳥巢南枝。 |
博士捉到虫虫了, 已改, 谢谢  |
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佳忆
童生
Joined: 14 Jan 2008
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| Posted: 2008-01-14 19:06:55 Post subject: |
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读.....
问好白水.../..
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莞君
秀才
Joined: 20 Oct 2007
Posts: 561
Location: 中国 陕西
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| Posted: 2008-01-14 20:34:08 Post subject: |
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欣赏好诗 最近考试啊 呵呵 少来了 问好您 延安下雪啦 呵呵
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荷梦
进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006
Posts: 2826
Location: 湖北，黄梅
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| Posted: 2008-01-15 05:03:38 Post subject: |
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| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
| 嘉慕思 wrote: |
向您学习.我的诗歌太具体,缺少概念.
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问好朋友, 我写诗歌总是情感所致,信手拈来, 从不刻意追求什么, 也没想许多. |
这样甚好,诗歌不一定要不朽,但一定在某刻感人.或者感动自己.问侯白水! |
是好诗，喜读！ |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2008-01-15 05:32:43 Post subject: |
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| 佳忆 wrote: |
读.....
问好白水.../.. |
问好朋友 |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2008-01-15 05:35:45 Post subject: |
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| 莞君 wrote: |
| 欣赏好诗 最近考试啊 呵呵 少来了 问好您 延安下雪啦 呵呵 |
考试是第一位的, 忙完再来. 延安下雪了? 考完试写首关于雪的诗歌吧. 想念大西北. |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection |
| Posted: 2008-01-15 05:36:47 Post subject: |
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| 荷梦 wrote: |
| 溪语 wrote: |
| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
| 嘉慕思 wrote: |
向您学习.我的诗歌太具体,缺少概念.
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问好朋友, 我写诗歌总是情感所致,信手拈来, 从不刻意追求什么, 也没想许多. |
这样甚好,诗歌不一定要不朽,但一定在某刻感人.或者感动自己.问侯白水! |
是好诗，喜读！ |
问好荷梦. |
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杯中冲浪
进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
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赵福治
探花
Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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| Posted: 2008-01-15 16:33:35 Post subject: |
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北斗指北
第零度空间 让我们
轮回 如果再一个
五千年
半张撕破的萱纸, 你
可否记得? ..........任意识渐次打开内心的封印,带给读者以体验.提读.欣赏. |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection |
| Posted: 2008-01-15 18:04:34 Post subject: |
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| 杯中冲浪 wrote: |
| 这是一首白水最抒情的诗，看得很感动阿。 |
谢谢冲浪,写给诗歌的, 所以比较有共鸣吧.  问好 |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2008-01-15 18:07:13 Post subject: |
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谢谢理解, 问好 |
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