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王君明
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PostPosted: 2011-02-26 08:45:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水好才情啊,一一的欣賞了!
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虚拟网络 真实生活
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连南河
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Location: Toronto
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PostPosted: 2011-02-27 13:05:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

七绝 感春

游子依依叹逝秋,
风中雨里遣乡愁.
浮云应忆窗前梦,
飘落春城望水流.

Feb. 27,2011,Hormish Garden of Toronto(南河书院)
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: 2012-02-26 13:41:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

和海蛎子

风雪横山野,凝眸睨小溪。
柳眉逐月远,杏眼追云低。
幽谷惊竹秀,京城叹梦奇。
推窗逢倩影,何必辟新蹊。
(MM的靓照) Very Happy


海蛎子原玉:

梅蕊娇寒野,冰凌暖故溪。
风清摇曳瘦,云淡放飞低。
枕石天相对,卧烟仙与齐。
泉潭犹可探,只要过幽蹊。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2012-04-22 06:57:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
Very Happy 秋香妹妹好诗,临屏一乐

七绝《三笑》
东施不效效秋香,三笑回眸笑虎王
懒舞凌风三尺剑,举杯邀月醉南唐

Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy


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秋叶原玉:
秋叶 wrote:
写了一半的回望一直没空去望,今遵旨白水兄交货,望赐教('thanks')


七律-回望2011

送兔迎龙又一巡, 徘徊市道复艰辛。
常将碗缽多容饭, 偶读诗书少入神。
对月衔觞循五柳, 迎风冒雨走三秦。
我生贫富凭天定, 不作东施总效颦。

复,缽,一,读---为入声
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白水
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PostPosted: 2013-03-03 01:30:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

临屏草和
七绝《早春》
水泊梨花弄碧枝
墨浓恰是早春时
江舟轻载吴侬乐
南瑟悠悠和北诗

问好
笑聊原玉:
《咏梅》

水 韵迎来花放时,墨 香勾出冷芳枝。
江 东江左天同月,南 孕越吴千万诗。
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2013-03-03 19:56:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好白水。临屏步韵和:

水 暖鸥鸦栖绿枝
墨 淋雨画恰春时
江 河一页小舟过
南 乐催来雅客诗
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白水
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PostPosted: 2013-03-04 01:23:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢笑聊和诗,问好
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白水
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PostPosted: 2014-12-25 18:46:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

昨晚和先生到DOWNTOWN雨夜观灯, 高速弯道多,雨急路滑,先生说:再别干这种傻事.我却偷着乐,看车河灯影, 珠帘雾浓,,, ,,,

昨夜飞舟代步
误潜银河深处
灯影绽繁星, 缭绕雨帘珠幕
重渡,重渡
又见九天逐鹿


晓松原玉:
想起白水的【如梦令】

酒后不知归处,
满眼非烟即雾。
脚下似腾云,坠入北郊南浦。
挪步,挪步,
倒海翻江难诉。


逐鹿

雨幕


2014圣诞雨夜,摄于央街
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晓松
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PostPosted: 2014-12-25 21:18:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
临屏草和
临屏草和
七绝《早春》
水泊梨花弄碧枝
墨浓恰是早春时
江舟轻载吴侬乐
南瑟悠悠和北诗


藏头诗,“水墨江南”,试和一首:

水乡春满翠盈枝,
墨洒丹青乘兴时。
江渚梅溪传管乐,
南村沽酒赋新诗。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2014-12-26 04:37:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松好和,谢谢
节日愉快 Very Happy
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白水
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PostPosted: 2014-12-29 07:17:50    Post subject: 不入祖诗爷眼,仅存友情与一乐 Reply with quote

临屏一乐,记诗友2014圣诞小聚

方雪张文万沐
秋叶百鸣词赋,
黄老庆宏,可见艳华歌舞?
如故,如故
白水冰清遥祝


灯夜巍拔迷路,松岭南河小住
惊现靓妹妹,疑是开二度
糊涂,糊涂
大卫忙扶眼镜 Very Happy Very Happy

1)那日因晚间聚会,没敢请冰清和黄老师来。前段日子联系连南河,听说在外阜工作,这次也未能聚。甚感遗憾。
2)此两小令因嵌名一乐,红字为诗友名,黄老指黄老师略有不合词牌处,见谅
3)我先生愣把万牧夫人看成他的女儿,晕死Very Happy Very Happy


以李存勗《如梦令·曾宴桃源深洞》为正体:

中仄中平平仄,中仄中平平仄。

曾宴桃源深洞,一曲舞鸾歌凤。

中仄仄平平,中仄仄平平仄。

长记别伊时,和泪出门相送。

平仄,〖平仄〗,中仄仄平平仄。

如梦,如梦,残月落花烟重。
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