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白水
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PostPosted: 2012-05-04 20:18:11    Post subject: 白内障 Reply with quote

白内障/白水

这一页, 翻过去就翻过去吧
我用一片雪花
蒙住眼睛
在第一千个流逝的晚上倾听
一千零一夜的故事
天籁无语, 窗外
惟有细雨如弦

我问阿炳
没有泉水难道就真的没有月亮?
那么如果泉水干涸, 那么
如果枯井? 他
冷成一尊石像, 颤动着
不再流泪的十指

长笑朝天, 为何去问一个瞎子
你应该问你的姐姐,她
是眼科医生
是啊, 眼科医生
一根热流导线融化了冰冷的雪

身后传来琴声
我暮然回首
看见那双干瘪的眼角挂着两滴
清冷的月光
(11/18/06)

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白水
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PostPosted: 2012-05-04 20:51:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢冰清一直留存着这首没有发表的小诗,还留下了写作时间。感动之余难免感慨,人生难得一知己,用她姐姐般的关爱和豁达,让自己在迷茫时能够冷静理智的看问题。
其实,人生最可怕的视觉障碍不在外界,而在自身。就像白内障,若不及时治疗,久而久之会让人失明。无论昨天,今日,还是将来。
留下这首诗, 存下这段字,常常清理一下可能再生的白内障。 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2012-05-05 00:48:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰水之交,姊妹情深,羡慕了
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PostPosted: 2012-05-09 12:21:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

万念由心生。人生最可怕的视觉障碍不在外界,而在自身,要及时治疗,才不至于失明。
欣赏!林琳
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PostPosted: 2012-05-11 09:57:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢林琳老师。春天大伙有点空就忙Garden, 冰清老师这段时间身体也不太好,没能组织大家聚会,有点遗憾。 你们如能相识,定会一见如故。
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PostPosted: 2012-05-11 09:58:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白水赠诗。几年来,我一直沉浸在你和很多朋友的关怀、厚爱、鼓励和扶助之中。我钦佩你才华,更感动于你的诚挚和友善啊!
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PostPosted: 2012-05-11 10:21:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好冰清,谢谢你的关爱与鼓励。还是那句话,仁者智者, 每个人都在用自己的眼睛看世界。
你写的《淡水交情》我看过后想了很多。我知道自己是一个有很多毛病的人(哈,我自己说可以,别人不可以说噢Razz),可你更多的看到的是我的长处。为什么?比较自我的人是不善于看到别人的优点的,反之亦同,这就是答案。 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2012-05-11 10:40:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
问好冰清,谢谢你的关爱与鼓励。还是那句话,仁者智者,每个人都在用自己的眼睛看世界。
你写的《淡水交情》我看过后想了很多。我知道自己是一个有很多毛病的人(哈,我自己说可以,别人不可以说噢),可你更多的看到的是我的长处。为什么?比较自我的人是不善于看到别人的优点的,反之亦同,这就是答案。
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白水,你说的这些,正是你人品及修养的独特之处。 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2012-05-12 10:42:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈,理解万岁 Razz
问好周末
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PostPosted: 2012-06-11 14:11:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

有些感动人的,还有一些需要发酵一番,在品一品。

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PostPosted: 2012-07-18 11:19:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

司马策风 wrote:
有些感动人的,还有一些需要发酵一番,在品一品。

司马策风问好


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PostPosted: 2012-08-12 11:36:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

太好了!!——我能发帖子了!
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PostPosted: 2012-08-13 10:29:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

长笑朝天, 为何去问一个瞎子
你应该问你的姐姐,她
是眼科医生
是啊, 眼科医生
一根热流导线融化了冰冷的雪

这一节转换的妙,从典故中回到现实,而且寓意丰富,又显轻松睿智。问好白水,久违了。
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PostPosted: 2012-08-13 10:42:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
太好了!!——我能发帖子了!


这是今天听到的最好的消息 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2012-08-13 10:49:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
长笑朝天, 为何去问一个瞎子
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冲浪好,见到你们真高兴。
习惯了与朋友们一起咬文嚼字,你们不来还真没弄墨的心情了。
唉,真不知诗神是否再次光顾 Wink
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PostPosted: 2012-08-13 11:05:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
杯中冲浪 wrote:
长笑朝天, 为何去问一个瞎子
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冲浪好,见到你们真高兴。
...

我们都是虫子,不知道新的前程是哪一片树叶,那片树叶是不是已经预先或将要撒农药,或者旁边枝上有没有觊觎等待的鸟。
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PostPosted: 2012-08-14 06:39:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
杯中冲浪 wrote:
长笑朝天, 为何去问一个瞎子
...


冲浪好,见到你们真高兴。
...

我们都是虫子,不知道新的前程是哪一片树叶,那片树叶是不是已经预先或将要撒农药,或者旁边枝上有没有觊觎等待的鸟。


问好冲浪,非常感谢你的提醒。
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PostPosted: 2012-08-26 16:41:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好!
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PostPosted: 2012-08-28 10:10:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好少君
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PostPosted: 2012-10-01 03:24:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

感人!
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