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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 21:55:36    Post subject: 点绛唇《波》 Reply with quote

点绛脣《波》

长夜昏昏,寒霜薄雪深深院。
北风轻卷,淡月舒光纤。
笑语贪欢,怎奈他乡雁,终难见。
烛花频剪,雾锁相思远。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 22:06:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗人笔触,贤妻情怀。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 22:07:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
点降唇《波》

长夜昏昏,寒霜薄雪深深院。
...
问好!指下误,当为“点绛脣”。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 22:53:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

李盈枝 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
点降唇《波》

长夜昏昏,寒霜薄雪深深院。
...
问好!指下误,当为“点绛脣”。


谢谢,打字太快,键误 Razz

新年好
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 22:58:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
诗人笔触,贤妻情怀。


谢谢qinghongh, 这是写给一只候鸟也是写给一群候鸟的。 Wink

祝阖家欢乐
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 23:03:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
qinghongh wrote:
诗人笔触,贤妻情怀。


谢谢qinghongh, 这是写给一只候鸟也是写给一群候鸟的。虽然大家都挺喜欢光导纤维 Wink
...


多保重!
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 23:13:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
李盈枝 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
点降唇《波》

长夜昏昏,寒霜薄雪深深院。
...
问好!指下误,当为“点绛脣”。


谢谢,打字太快,键误 Razz
...
也祝新年好!来到加拿大一个月了,一直没弄清谁是这里的大老板,故一箱茅台酒至今没送出去。白水先生看来是领导核心的要员,那就送一束鲜花,或许能给我安排个免费客栈,那么我就不会在多伦多街头徘徊了。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-31 08:04:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
qinghongh wrote:
诗人笔触,贤妻情怀。


谢谢qinghongh, 这是写给一只候鸟也是写给一群候鸟的。虽然大家都挺喜欢光导纤维 Wink
...


多保重!


谢谢。昨晚早早卧牛了 Wink
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PostPosted: 2009-12-31 08:12:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

李盈枝 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
李盈枝 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
点降唇《波》

长夜昏昏,寒霜薄雪深深院。
...
问好!指下误,当为“点绛脣”。


谢谢,打字太快,键误 Razz
...
也祝新年好!来到加拿大一个月了,一直没弄清谁是这里的大老板,故一箱茅台酒至今没送出去。白水先生看来是领导核心的要员,那就送一束鲜花,或许能给我安排个免费客栈,那么我就不会在多伦多街头徘徊了。


这里没老板,但听说喜欢茅台的不少。不好意思, 开个玩笑。
你真的刚到多伦多么?这里的朋友都很好,有什么事请告知,大家能帮一定会帮你的。如果方便可把你的电话号码短讯留给qinghongh 或给我都行。 问好。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-31 08:29:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
李盈枝 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
李盈枝 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
点降唇《波》

长夜昏昏,寒霜薄雪深深院。
...
问好!指下误,当为“点绛脣”。


谢谢,打字太快,键误 Razz
...
也祝新年好!来到加拿大一个月了,一直没弄清谁是这里的大老板,故一箱茅台酒至今没送出去。白水先生看来是领导核心的要员,那就送一束鲜花,或许能给我安排个免费客栈,那么我就不会在多伦多街头徘徊了。


这里没老板,但听说喜欢茅台的不少。不好意思, 开个玩笑。
...
哈哈,我只能梦游多伦多。此刻正在齐鲁某山区的蜗牛村吸劣质烟。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-31 11:34:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

李兄是网临北美枫漫游多伦多。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-31 12:01:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
李兄是网临北美枫漫游多伦多。
古风•2010年第一天戏作

李兄是网临北美枫漫游多伦多(qinghongh)












——关机后睡醒一觉试作
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PostPosted: 2009-12-31 12:05:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

你真的刚到多伦多么?这里的朋友都很好,有什么事请告知,大家能帮一定会帮你的。如果方便可把你的电话号码短讯留给qinghongh 或给我都行。 问好。

白水先生真是厚道人。若在现实生活中我果真在多伦多落难,那真是不愁没有热心人救助了。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-31 13:10:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

白话古风•2010年第一天戏作打油诗

李兄是
网临北美枫漫游多伦多(qinghongh)

网络学艺忘命蹇,
临屏逢友各开颜。
北风入户寸心暖,
美好情谊重于山。
枫红雪白春草绿,
漫卷诗书有余闲。
游于唐韵宋意里,
多在随心自娱间。
伦常虽旧兄弟在,
多少豪兴寄雄关。

2010-1-1凌晨3:12草就
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PostPosted: 2009-12-31 18:14:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

韵昧幽深。
白水,让我读懂了你一往豪气、豪情的另一面!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-01 11:24:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
李兄是网临北美枫漫游多伦多。


早不说 Embarassed Wink
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PostPosted: 2010-01-01 11:27:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

李盈枝 wrote:
你真的刚到多伦多么?这里的朋友都很好,有什么事请告知,大家能帮一定会帮你的。如果方便可把你的电话号码短讯留给qinghongh 或给我都行。 问好。
白水先生真是厚道人。若在现实生活中我果真在多伦多落难,那真是不愁没有热心人救助了。
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这里的朋友的确很好,他们给我许多帮助,借此帖再次感谢
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PostPosted: 2010-01-01 11:30:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

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韵昧幽深。
白水,让我读懂了你一往豪气、豪情的另一面!


冰清,再次感谢,你总是给与许多鼓励与关心。问好新年
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PostPosted: 2010-01-04 02:20:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

"长夜昏昏",情意深深,
问白水兄新年好!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-04 03:21:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
点绛唇《波》

长夜昏昏,寒霜薄雪深深院。
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“纤”字是韵脚,此处当为仄声。问好!
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