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秋叶
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Posted: 2009-01-10 11:21:35 Post subject: 七律－回望2008(修改稿)

前二年都有诗回望过，今年也不好例外，草上一首望斧正：七律－回望2008 风雪兼程渡岁关，人生栈道越艰难。商场碌碌谋柴米，客户频频减货单。股债金融颓势猛，楼房价格跌声寒。庭前见惯花开落，世道折腾迎鹤还。碌，跌，折―入声折腾－时髦用语，＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝七律－回望商海浮沉又一年，　风狂浪骤过深渊。久无雅兴敲新句，　暂有残诗和众贤。对镜频频凝鬓色，　驱车疾疾越山川。为谋生计添烦苦，　回首瞻前更失眠。和：去声一，疾，失：入声 2006/12 ＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝七律－回望 2007 人生回望又匆匆，岁晚沉思寥寂中。所幸同俦微异己，尚存片瓦对寒风。故人渺渺烟云散，大雪茫茫塔影空。浪迹天涯停泊处，歌吟动地啸苍穹。寂，迹，泊－入声 2007 12 31

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Posted: 2009-01-10 18:38:12 Post subject:

年年有望年年望,一叶知秋总适时. 祝秋叶牛年诗坛商场双丰收! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2009-01-11 05:01:28 Post subject:

年年回望年年望，希望牛年牛起来，抱条金牛回家转！！！

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Posted: 2009-01-11 08:24:28 Post subject:

庭前见惯花开落，世道折腾牛角还。

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Posted: 2009-01-12 13:45:13 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

年年有望年年望,一叶知秋总适时.

祝秋叶牛年诗坛商场双丰收!

谢谢黄老师祝愿，也祝您新的一年万事如意！

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Posted: 2009-01-12 13:46:49 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

年年回望年年望，希望牛年牛起来，抱条金牛回家转！！！ Laughing

庆宏兄，同感，同贺。' thanks

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Posted: 2009-01-12 13:49:15 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

庭前见惯花开落，世道折腾牛角还。

Very Happy

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Posted: 2009-01-12 14:30:50 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

庭前见惯花开落，世道折腾牛角还。

Very Happy

秋香MM, 你的眼睛好吓人哇,,,,,, Laughing

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Posted: 2009-01-12 17:16:31 Post subject:

祝贺秋兄商场诗坛双丰收千山皑皑银龙锁万水滔滔碧波催弹指四十秋叶落一朝抱得金牛回 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2009-01-13 05:53:27 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

七律－回望

商海浮沉又一年，　风狂浪骤过深渊。
久无雅兴敲新句，　暂有残诗和众贤。
对镜频频凝鬓色，　驱车疾疾越山川。
为谋生计添烦苦，　回首瞻前更失眠。
和：去声
一，疾，失：入声
2006/12

七律　步韵奉和

回眸壬戌太平年，似有乾龙潜入渊。
斟酒杯中饮君子，品茶壶里沏贞贤。
不甘默默游西野，却合悠悠涉大川。
最是揪心烦恼事，天伦美梦伴无眠。

Laughing

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Posted: 2009-01-14 05:38:44 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

七律－回望 2007

人生回望又匆匆，岁晚沉思寥寂中。
所幸同俦微异己，尚存片瓦对寒风。
故人渺渺烟云散，大雪茫茫塔影空。
浪迹天涯停泊处，歌吟动地啸苍穹。
寂，迹，泊－入声
2007 12 31

七律步韵奉和

癸亥追思韵步匆，取毫凝墨乐其中。
满园春色调花柳，半亩桑麻顺雨风。
衔此萧萧枫叶满，登时脉脉玉人空。
不堪容忍缠头价，冷酒凉茶结窟穹。

Laughing

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Posted: 2009-01-14 08:22:07 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

祝贺秋兄商场诗坛双丰收
...

千山皑皑银龙锁
万水滔滔碧波催
好对耶。

谢谢岛主，也祝您新年快乐，万事如意！

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Posted: 2009-01-14 08:31:01 Post subject:

孬不好 wrote:

秋叶 wrote:

七律步韵奉和
...

好诗，谢谢和作。

征下联
诗坛高手，多才才女急才至

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Posted: 2009-01-14 14:29:23 Post subject:

商场怪杰，善财财子散财来 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2009-01-15 06:06:41 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

七律－回望2008

风雪兼程渡岁关，人生栈道越艰难。
商场碌碌谋柴米，网络频频搜论坛。
股债金融颓势猛，楼房价格跌声寒。。
庭前见惯花开落，世道折腾迎鹤还。

碌，跌，折―入声
折腾－时髦用语，

七律步韵奉和

自从甲子出幽关，日日吟哦蜀道难。
有意安排油与罐，无心挤兑醋和坛。
似乎凤蜡余悲浅，仿佛昙花尽夜寒。
好在泪珠脂粉敛，任君消受一嗔还。

Laughing

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Posted: 2009-01-15 06:09:28 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

征下联
诗坛高手，多才才女急才至

画苑小童，双眼眼珠瞠眼开

Laughing

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Posted: 2009-01-15 10:12:58 Post subject:

秋斑,读诗有感飘零莫叹一儒商行迹匆匆为哪桩劲节如君成色好枫桥琥珀是华章

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Posted: 2009-01-15 11:57:49 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

商场怪杰，善财财子散财来 Laughing

岛主好对，平仄稍失对 Laughing

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Posted: 2009-01-15 12:01:27 Post subject:

孬不好 wrote:

秋叶 wrote:

征下联
诗坛高手，多才才女急才至

画苑小童，双眼眼珠瞠眼开
...

好对，是这样瞠'

'还是这样'

'瞠？

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Posted: 2009-01-15 12:05:08 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

秋斑,读诗有感
...

冰清老师，不敢当耶，谢谢和作。祝新春愉快！

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