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《橡胶树老了》

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半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-09-18 17:11:35 Post subject: 《橡胶树老了》

《橡胶树老了》一棵橡胶树老了。被刀子割了上千次的伤口再也流不出一滴泪。那些牛奶一样的橡胶汁液天然，被添加进想象和爱情它不是粮食，是一杯毒药凝固成诱人的琥珀。一棵橡胶树的悲哀，在于它生来就是一棵橡胶树。无怨无悔，如一头奶牛奉献洁白的乳汁。现在，它老了人们的刀子再也剜不动它皱龟的树皮。遗弃在秋风中等待，内心的火渐渐熄灭。

赵福治
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Posted: 2008-09-18 21:30:16 Post subject:

内心内体验的一首.

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-09-19 03:53:52 Post subject:

谢谢福治的评读～

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Posted: 2008-09-19 14:34:13 Post subject:

分享: <朋友何必为年龄发愁> __列宁春天后面不是秋何必为年龄发愁只要在秋天结下丰硕的果实何必在春花面前害羞有时我也着急那时因为工作的不顺利有时我也发愁那是因为政治上比人落后我踏遍了人生的道路人民的事业在世界上青春最长久谁的生命与他结合那白发永远不会上他的头我不再有什么要求我的要求就是在大家的要求里头我不再计较个人的幸福我的幸福就在大家的幸福里头啊——朋友何必你要为年龄发愁

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-09-20 03:31:54 Post subject:

谢谢白水转帖的诗. 上面的已经修改过了,以后再贴吧!

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-09-22 03:53:05 Post subject:

很漂亮的句子，很美的诗意。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2008-09-23 14:21:23 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

《橡胶树老了》
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哇，橡胶树老了，越来越有味道。
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Posted: 2008-09-23 14:27:13 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

分享:
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列宁写诗也这么好，感觉比毛泽东要写得好。白水还读列宁的诗，兴趣广泛。我们得遵从伟大导师的教导，这样永远也老不了。不会变老。

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有时我也着急

那时因为工作的不顺利

有时我也发愁

那是因为政治上比人落后

我踏遍了人生的道路

人民的事业在世界上青春最长久
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Posted: 2008-09-27 16:34:18 Post subject:

可怜的老树、、、问好

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-09-27 18:48:17 Post subject:

问好楼上的朋友~国庆节快乐!

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Posted: 2008-09-27 20:00:14 Post subject:

很深的挖掘，比较深刻有痛感，影射很多事物的过程，在坚忍中犹如这橡胶一样刚毅且柔软。 _________________ 诗歌、诗剧。以文会友。http://blog.sina.com.cn/juneraiyue112

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-09-28 00:58:27 Post subject:

谢谢爱月的热心点评~节日快乐!

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Posted: 2008-09-29 16:50:46 Post subject:

问好朋友，祝节日愉快。

秀水
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Posted: 2008-09-29 22:20:04 Post subject:

颀赏.明月节日好 _________________ 秀水：省青协会员.在《星星诗刊》《绿风》《诗选刊》《常青藤诗刊》等发表诗歌散文二百余篇。兼写童话。邮箱xshx100@163.com 秀水博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/feizoudeshui

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-10-01 04:13:05 Post subject:

问好新华，秀水～国庆节快乐！

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Posted: 2008-10-02 00:59:49 Post subject:

对橡胶树的思考,对人生的思考! _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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Posted: 2008-10-02 04:39:29 Post subject:

不要内心的火渐渐熄灭节日快乐！ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2008-10-02 06:24:08 Post subject:

很爽的一首！！ _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-10-04 05:15:51 Post subject:

问好溪语～

钓月
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Posted: 2008-10-04 15:43:50 Post subject:

你在我的心中，还是一个诗歌娇娃，何必如此伤时感事！问好！ _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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