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白水
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Posted: 2008-06-20 19:31:18 Post subject: 相对论(外二首)

相对论是是非非似是而非在是与非之间我横跨一颗睿智的头颅与人间最性感的女子远距离相望宇宙是可以折叠的你为我折叠出六维空间的迷幻而我只看见一张白纸写满了“视觉” when you look at this picture closely you can see albert EinsteinBUTif you stand about 5 meters distance from your PCit will become Marliyn Monroe（女明星：玛莉莲梦露）its nice try it 站远点看, 换一个角度看世界, 视觉会给我们带来什么 <苹果> 罪之源天地之间之原罪在于那位名为牛顿的老头不该坐在树下看一颗苹果堕落白雪公主一定是在夏天醒来的要不，怎么会有这许多泪水她突然发现她深深爱恋的白马王子竟是五千年前死去的父亲而母亲母亲早已还原于亚当胸腔的一根肋骨继母是蛇么？为何送来鲜红的苹果公主哭了公主的眼泪淹没了大海而海水从来都是咸的我独倚西窗，看海的远处一滴夜露把那颗晶莹透亮的苹果摔的粉碎 <招安> 一个古老而又新鲜的词汇我想到宋江那个又矮又黑的胖子曾几何时我以为我就是施耐庵的转世灵童矫情的平平仄仄敲打出一百单八个泥胚鲜活的返朴归真市场上偏偏卖不出高价我只好涂釉，回炉聚天地之高温多么光鲜亮丽的瓷人我小心翼翼的捧着面向半坡村秦川大地我的列祖列宗怅然无语

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Posted: 2008-06-20 19:33:51 Post subject:

我横跨一颗睿智的头颅其他句子很好，独这一句不好解释。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

白水
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Posted: 2008-06-20 19:37:09 Post subject:

你看看这张图,看见爱因斯坦的大脑门和一位大美女了吗

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Posted: 2008-06-20 20:23:47 Post subject:

很理性我正输入诗歌的同时，也看到哲学觉得尼采很有意思 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

陶斯人也
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Posted: 2008-06-20 20:37:57 Post subject:

宇宙是可以折叠的你为我折叠出六维空间的迷幻而我只看见一张白纸写满了“视觉” 哲思和诗意

白水
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Posted: 2008-06-20 21:05:47 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

很理性
我正输入诗歌的同时，也看到哲学
觉得尼采很有意思

还在输入英文诗歌? 尼采的确值得读, 他是激情的, 又是哲思的. 写诗歌离不开激情, 而好的诗歌却离不开哲学的支撑. 愿你们写出更好的诗歌.

白水
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Posted: 2008-06-20 21:10:28 Post subject:

陶斯人也 wrote:

宇宙是可以折叠的
你为我折叠出六维空间的迷幻
而我只看见一张白纸
写满了“视觉”

哲思和诗意
...

谢谢鼓励, 一直希望自己的诗歌能逐步由感性向理性转变.
问好

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Posted: 2008-06-21 03:05:44 Post subject:

开始有小变化了。招安有新意。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2008-06-21 04:58:32 Post subject:

问候姐姐睿智干净喜欢后两个 _________________ 莞君

白水
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Posted: 2008-06-21 05:06:43 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

开始有小变化了。

招安有新意。

是吗

问好

白水
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Posted: 2008-06-21 05:09:57 Post subject:

莞君 wrote:

问候姐姐睿智干净喜欢后两个

问好莞君. 好眼力. 第一首是临屏而作, 虽有灵感, 缺乏沉淀.
不过我特希望你在不同的距离看这幅画, 最好在5M之外, 看出不同了吗 Confused

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Posted: 2008-06-21 05:46:06 Post subject:

离远看了，离远了就是马丽莲．梦露，不同的角度欣赏的的确不同，有人欣赏的是智，有人欣赏的是貌，若能多角度看问题，就是哲学了～白水的这几首有哲学的诗思～

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Posted: 2008-06-21 18:06:22 Post subject:

谢谢月亮, 我还怕这图不WORK呢. 这小图同时也让人醒悟, 不同的角度和距离观查问题得出的结论也不同......

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Posted: 2008-06-21 18:27:31 Post subject:

<招安> 有些别致问好白先生 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2008-06-21 20:38:08 Post subject:

哲思的文与图。。问白水好！

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Posted: 2008-06-22 05:26:34 Post subject:

司马策风 wrote:

<招安> 有些别致

问好白先生

问好司先生

白水
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Posted: 2008-06-22 05:27:15 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

哲思的文与图。。
问白水好！

久不见, 问好荷梦

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Posted: 2008-06-22 06:23:42 Post subject:

宇宙是可以折叠的你为我折叠出六维空间的迷幻而我只看见一张白纸写满了“视觉好有感觉.学习了 _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金

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Posted: 2008-06-22 06:26:16 Post subject:

问好合心. 更喜欢你的诗歌, 清馨, 灵动.

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Posted: 2008-06-23 11:43:02 Post subject:

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