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白水
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PostPosted: 2008-06-20 19:31:18    Post subject: 相对论(外二首) Reply with quote

相对论

是是非非
似是而非
在是与非之间
我横跨一颗睿智的头颅
与人间最性感的女子
远距离相望

宇宙是可以折叠的
你为我折叠出六维空间的迷幻
而我只看见一张白纸
写满了“视觉”


when you look at this picture closely you can see albert EinsteinBUTif you stand about 5 meters distance from your PCit will become Marliyn Monroe(女明星:玛莉莲梦露)its nice try it



站远点看, 换一个角度看世界, 视觉会给我们带来什么 Confused

<苹果>

罪之源
天地之间之原罪在于那位
名为牛顿的老头
不该坐在树下
看一颗苹果堕落

白雪公主一定是在夏天醒来的
要不,怎么会有这许多泪水
她突然发现她深深爱恋的白马王子
竟是五千年前死去的父亲
而母亲
母亲早已还原于亚当
胸腔的一根肋骨

继母是蛇么?
为何送来鲜红的苹果
公主哭了
公主的眼泪淹没了大海
而海水
从来都是咸的

我独倚西窗,看
海的远处
一滴夜露把那颗晶莹透亮的苹果
摔的粉碎

<招安>

一个古老而又新鲜的词汇
我想到宋江
那个又矮又黑的胖子
曾几何时
我以为我就是施耐庵的转世灵童
矫情的平平仄仄
敲打出一百单八个泥胚

鲜活的返朴归真
市场上偏偏卖不出高价
我只好涂釉,回炉
聚天地之高温
多么光鲜亮丽的瓷人
我小心翼翼的捧着
面向半坡村
秦川大地我的列祖列宗
怅然无语
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PostPosted: 2008-06-20 19:33:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

我横跨一颗睿智的头颅
其他句子很好,独这一句不好解释。
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PostPosted: 2008-06-20 19:37:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

你看看这张图,看见爱因斯坦的大脑门和一位大美女了吗Wink
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PostPosted: 2008-06-20 20:23:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

很理性
我正输入诗歌的同时,也看到哲学
觉得尼采很有意思
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PostPosted: 2008-06-20 20:37:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

宇宙是可以折叠的
你为我折叠出六维空间的迷幻
而我只看见一张白纸
写满了“视觉”

哲思和诗意
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PostPosted: 2008-06-20 21:05:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
很理性
我正输入诗歌的同时,也看到哲学
觉得尼采很有意思


还在输入英文诗歌? 尼采的确值得读, 他是激情的, 又是哲思的. 写诗歌离不开激情, 而好的诗歌却离不开哲学的支撑. 愿你们写出更好的诗歌.
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PostPosted: 2008-06-20 21:10:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

陶斯人也 wrote:
宇宙是可以折叠的
你为我折叠出六维空间的迷幻
而我只看见一张白纸
写满了“视觉”

哲思和诗意
...


谢谢鼓励, 一直希望自己的诗歌能逐步由感性向理性转变.
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PostPosted: 2008-06-21 03:05:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

开始有小变化了。 Smile

招安有新意。
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PostPosted: 2008-06-21 04:58:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

问候姐姐 睿智 干净 喜欢后两个
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PostPosted: 2008-06-21 05:06:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
开始有小变化了。 Smile

招安有新意。

是吗 Confused 问好 Wink
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PostPosted: 2008-06-21 05:09:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

莞君 wrote:
问候姐姐 睿智 干净 喜欢后两个


问好莞君. 好眼力. 第一首是临屏而作, 虽有灵感, 缺乏沉淀.
不过我特希望你在不同的距离看这幅画, 最好在5M之外, 看出不同了吗 Confused
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PostPosted: 2008-06-21 05:46:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

离远看了,离远了就是马丽莲.梦露,不同的角度欣赏的的确不同,有人欣赏的是智,有人欣赏的是貌,若能多角度看问题,就是哲学了~
白水的这几首有哲学的诗思~
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PostPosted: 2008-06-21 18:06:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢月亮, 我还怕这图不WORK呢. 这小图同时也让人醒悟, 不同的角度和距离观查问题得出的结论也不同......
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PostPosted: 2008-06-21 18:27:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

<招安> 有些别致

问好白先生
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PostPosted: 2008-06-21 20:38:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

哲思的文与图。。
问白水好!
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PostPosted: 2008-06-22 05:26:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

司马策风 wrote:
<招安> 有些别致

问好白先生


问好司先生 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-06-22 05:27:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

荷梦 wrote:
哲思的文与图。。
问白水好!


久不见, 问好荷梦
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PostPosted: 2008-06-22 06:23:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

宇宙是可以折叠的
你为我折叠出六维空间的迷幻
而我只看见一张白纸
写满了“视觉

好有感觉.学习了
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PostPosted: 2008-06-22 06:26:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好合心. 更喜欢你的诗歌, 清馨, 灵动.
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PostPosted: 2008-06-23 11:43:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

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