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【这一次，我彻底病了】

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半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-01-07 22:55:32 Post subject: 【这一次，我彻底病了】

【这一次，我彻底病了】能感觉，一条蛇从嗓子一点点入侵顽固盘踞下来在身体某个阴暗角落它牢牢卡住我的三寸让我眩晕并日夜咳嗽我试着妥协，安抚并喂给它药。它无比精明在我身体里种许多桃花那些药瘦弱，养不活她们动一动，就听到什么在落现在，我已失声像一条鱼，张着嘴吐出的你永远不会明白

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-01-07 23:32:21 Post subject:

真佩服明月，感冒也能整出一段文字来，读起来，别有寓意呢！希望早日康复！

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Posted: 2008-01-08 00:15:54 Post subject:

有感,好詩! _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

悠子
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Posted: 2008-01-08 01:01:28 Post subject:

已经出了好诗，病就快快好吧.

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-01-08 01:25:01 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

真佩服明月，感冒也能整出一段文字来，读起来，别有寓意呢！
希望早日康复！

呵呵，找不到写的，就喜欢写哀的～

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Posted: 2008-01-08 01:26:24 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

有感,好詩!

谢谢博弈欣赏～

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Posted: 2008-01-08 01:30:58 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

已经出了好诗，病就快快好吧.

轻多了，谢谢悠子的关心～ Smile

溪语
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Posted: 2008-01-08 02:02:03 Post subject:

感觉不错。喜欢。 _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

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Posted: 2008-01-08 04:45:49 Post subject:

看来是真病了, 愿早日康复！

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-01-08 11:36:19 Post subject:

[quote="溪语"]感觉不错。喜欢。[/quote] 谢溪语喜欢~年好！

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-01-08 11:56:06 Post subject:

[quote="白水 Moonlight"]看来是真病了, 愿早日康复！[/quot 呵呵，好多了，感谢关心~

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Posted: 2008-01-08 12:35:35 Post subject:

该好好的休息

子花
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Posted: 2008-01-08 15:06:49 Post subject:

多保重身体！新年快乐！

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-01-08 16:43:35 Post subject:

[quote="迪拜"]该好好的休息[/quote] 感谢迪拜关心，没多大问题～

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Posted: 2008-01-08 17:09:53 Post subject:

从诗来看，思维清晰，应该状况还不是太差。发个后现代上来，大家就会担心了。还是好好将息，不要把你公司拖破产 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-01-09 11:55:33 Post subject:

阿奇霉素效果很好。不过诗歌的效果更好。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2008-01-09 12:14:24 Post subject:

[quote="子花"]多保重身体！新年快乐！[/quote] 谢子花关心,新年快乐~

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-01-09 12:16:44 Post subject:

[quote="nobody"]从诗来看，思维清晰，应该状况还不是太差。发个后现代上来，大家就会担心了。还是好好将息，不要把你公司拖破产 [/quote] 呵呵,我到想写个后现代的，让你们担心担心呢,可惜我就是这样清醒~

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-01-09 12:18:54 Post subject:

[quote="杯中冲浪"]阿奇霉素效果很好。不过诗歌的效果更好。[/quote] 谢关心,诗好全凭药的疗效好~

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Posted: 2008-01-09 12:22:17 Post subject:

纯熟的一个欣赏了问好姐姐 _________________ 莞君

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