曲元奇
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Joined: 01 Mar 2008
Posts: 427
Location: 山东
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 Posted: 2008-03-05 19:29:08 Post subject: 古桥 |
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一棵苍柏陪伴着古桥
车辆和行人不再经过这里
都走着今日通向罗马的新衢
我来这里为自己也为古桥打捞
打捞的又从网孔里流失 |
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悠子
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Joined: 04 Jan 2008
Posts: 1383
Location: US
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| Posted: 2008-03-05 19:34:27 Post subject: |
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| 古桥，可以保护起来~ |
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苏茉儿
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Joined: 31 Dec 2007
Posts: 739
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| Posted: 2008-03-05 19:36:23 Post subject: |
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看这首短短的小诗，好想说些什么，却又不知该说些什么。很难以言表的一种感觉！反正是耐读的小诗！
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詩盜喜裸評
进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007
Posts: 2984
Location: 台湾，台北
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| Posted: 2008-03-05 19:41:57 Post subject: |
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可以再添些张力！
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wq0066
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Joined: 01 Jun 2008
Posts: 126
Location: 中国重庆
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| Posted: 2008-06-16 07:45:47 Post subject: |
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感觉意境挺美滴...
谢谢分享!
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红袖添乱
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Joined: 09 Jan 2008
Posts: 778
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| Posted: 2008-06-16 22:33:41 Post subject: |
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哈~~挺脱俗的。。。这黑山野水。。很美
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曲元奇
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Joined: 01 Mar 2008
Posts: 427
Location: 山东
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| Posted: 2008-06-19 21:49:22 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢 |
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