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机关联，浪子兼向朋友们问好！

金沙浪子
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Posted: 2010-03-27 06:36:38 Post subject: 机关联，浪子兼向朋友们问好！

出句：山丘叠岳白水飞泉森林木(金沙浪子) _________________ 山间十载槐香梦，世井一茬走马春。过尽晴川与雾海，未遭奇变是真人。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-03-27 19:44:05 Post subject:

笑对一下: 山丘叠岳白水飞泉森林木, 老板高层文书打杂众从人. _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-03-27 21:06:05 Post subject:

山丘=岳；白水=泉。老板？=层；文书？=杂众从人=森林木。加油！

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-03-28 07:09:08 Post subject:

这机关联妙在都是上下结构，试对：山丘叠岳白水飞泉森林木, 竹肋为筋分心当忿众从人。出句是：平平（仄）仄仄仄平平平平仄，对句是：仄仄平平平平仄仄仄平平。从没玩过，不知对否，望老师们指正！

金沙浪子
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Posted: 2010-03-28 15:19:24 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

这机关联妙在都是上下结构，试对：
...

笑聊老师好联！浪子谢谢老师。
_________________
山间十载槐香梦，世井一茬走马春。
过尽晴川与雾海，未遭奇变是真人。

金沙浪子
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Posted: 2010-03-28 15:22:33 Post subject:

白云老师好！先谢谢老师。这机关，是联中的机关，是汉字的“拆”与“合”。老师按事物铺陈来对，也出新意。 _________________ 山间十载槐香梦，世井一茬走马春。过尽晴川与雾海，未遭奇变是真人。

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Posted: 2010-03-28 19:53:19 Post subject:

謝謝金沙浪子解释机关所在! 謝謝庆宏的提示! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

金沙浪子
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Posted: 2010-03-28 23:22:38 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

这机关联妙在都是上下结构，试对：
...

谢谢笑聊老师。对得极工。
_________________
山间十载槐香梦，世井一茬走马春。
过尽晴川与雾海，未遭奇变是真人。

金沙浪子
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Posted: 2010-03-28 23:23:29 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

山丘=岳；白水=泉。
老板？=层；文书？=杂

众从人=森林木。

加油！

谢谢老师！
_________________
山间十载槐香梦，世井一茬走马春。
过尽晴川与雾海，未遭奇变是真人。

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-03-29 03:49:00 Post subject:

[quote="金沙浪子"][quote="笑聊"]这机关联妙在都是上下结构，试对： ...[/quote]谢谢笑聊老师。对得极工。[/quote] 谢谢雅评！确实汗颜。对联是我弱项，是庆宏兄的提示；白云兄的“众从人”给了我启发。顺问好！

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