影沉寒水 举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2013-08-25 18:32:37 Post subject: 古绝•立秋(新韵) |
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古绝•立秋(新韵)
七月何流火?人间尚蒸笼。
一路喧嚣景,不见有凉亭。
古绝•入世(新韵)
如此风尘难著力,匣中长剑总悲鸣。
可怜路远违鸿雁,故乡千里梦秋萍。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2013-08-26 05:22:09 Post subject: |
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气候日风下,人间似火炉。 |
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桃园郎 童生
Joined: 06 Mar 2013 Posts: 53 Location: 中国四川省大英县 桃园郎Collection |
Posted: 2013-08-27 16:40:43 Post subject: |
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匣中长剑总悲鸣 _________________ 诗词艺苑欢迎你!
百度“诗词艺苑”即可找到网址。 |
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影沉寒水 举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2013-08-27 21:27:51 Post subject: |
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问好二位朋友 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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冷雨 秀才
Joined: 05 Nov 2010 Posts: 439
冷雨Collection |
Posted: 2013-09-18 23:23:21 Post subject: |
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问好诗友!中秋节快乐! |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2013-09-19 01:47:47 Post subject: |
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古绝•立秋(新韵)
七月何流火?人间尚蒸笼。
一路喧嚣景,不见有凉亭。
最喜欢这首,对比甚妙。 |
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