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生查子 - 大自然协奏曲 (三)

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Posted: 2013-06-20 05:56:58 Post subject: 生查子 - 大自然协奏曲 (三)

泉喧山更幽，鳥唱林逾静。曉霞染树梢，七彩盈東嶺。乘風摘片雲，润入詩中景。山水醉翁情，痴韵迭吟咏。 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2013-06-20 05:58:45 Post subject:

泉喧山更幽，鳥唱林逾静。很有自然哲理。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2013-06-20 06:07:38 Post subject:

謝謝庆宏賞評！美丽澄净的大自然，使得清泉更幽雅，小鳥更欢唱！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2013-06-20 08:14:47 Post subject:

旭日東昇，七彩霞光缭绕在翠岭上，把林梢染得美妙动人。此時，清泉的叮咚流暢之声显得晓山更加清幽，雀鸟喜迎朝阳的婉转歌声逾发襯托出林荫的宁静。山水醉翁的我更为大自然优美所感动，诗兴欣然，便迎着艳阳乘风採摘一片七彩雲霞，以润色赞美大自然景色的诗篇，痴醉之韵律迭迭咏诵大自然协奏曲！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2013-06-20 09:16:34 Post subject:

“乘風摘片雲，润入詩中景。” 好。 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-06-21 10:29:41 Post subject:

謝謝一无賞評！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2013-06-22 04:52:51 Post subject:

风动白云中山水醉仙翁 _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

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Posted: 2013-06-22 09:33:01 Post subject:

山水醉翁謝謝連南河！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2013-06-23 20:57:26 Post subject:

泉喧山更幽，鳥唱林逾静。曉霞染树梢，七彩盈東嶺。声色俱明；自然的动态美。学习并问候！

白云闲人
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Posted: 2013-06-24 10:51:25 Post subject:

謝謝笑聊！我只是把一幅大自然的景色剪裁到诗中。 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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