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动物系列——虎1

非马
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Joined: 22 Jun 2006
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Location: 芝加哥
非马Collection

Posted: 2009-08-16 17:33:24 Post subject: 动物系列——虎1

虎1 你一皱眉所有的耳边便呼呼响起风声蓄势待扑── 吓呆了的眼睛们对著越张越大的血盆大口竟视若无睹不知走避如受催眠而你只不过张嘴打了个哈欠伸一下懒腰在铁栅栏里 _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

nobody
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Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
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Posted: 2009-08-16 19:39:24 Post subject:

生动形象，如在现场。但更喜欢这系列里其他的几个。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

郄智成
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Joined: 15 Oct 2009
Posts: 10

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Posted: 2009-10-22 02:13:22 Post subject:

读先生的诗真是一种享受

魏东建
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Joined: 21 Sep 2009
Posts: 41
Location: 山东济南
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Posted: 2009-10-22 02:56:05 Post subject:

传神 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/wdj行走在思想的边缘的我，以为人生的姿态就是行走意或飞翔，在大地上的我仰望苍穹！

赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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Posted: 2009-10-22 20:13:04 Post subject:

形象传神,问好先生.

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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Posted: 2009-10-23 07:46:34 Post subject:

也许您的意思不只是字面的传神，有更深层的影射才对。问好非马先生~

非马
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Joined: 22 Jun 2006
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Location: 芝加哥
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Posted: 2009-10-23 09:08:54 Post subject:

问诸位好! 我希望读者能从我的作品中各取所需,构筑自己的诗境. _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

任敬伟
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Joined: 16 Nov 2006
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Posted: 2009-10-26 01:32:24 Post subject:

宝刀光芒依旧

上城
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Posted: 2009-11-04 04:25:11 Post subject:

看这首想起奥地利的《豹》此诗虽好，摆脱不了别人的影子。二：自己的影子两个影子，伴随人。问好先生 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

江南雨
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Joined: 03 Jul 2009
Posts: 627
Location: 中国陕西省
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Posted: 2009-11-05 19:30:14 Post subject:

读先生的诗真是一种享受 _________________ 陕西姜华

沙漠
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Joined: 26 Jan 2007
Posts: 977
Location: 中国温州
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Posted: 2009-11-07 21:03:30 Post subject:

享受！谢谢！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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