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金沙浪子
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PostPosted: 2008-10-17 14:54:05    Post subject: 巧家八景小题) Reply with quote

玉屏春晓
玉冷东山破冻初,
屏环鹅翠浅绒苏。
春山怎奈轻描画,
晓岭晴岚夜雨酥。

莲池晚风
莲池轻漾动香微,
池畔柔丝万线垂。
晚荡清凉襟袖满,
风撩荷韵傍人归。

龙潭夜月
龙潜清碧接天凉,
潭映枝柯黯殿廊。
夜涌虫嘶鸣籁久,
月银轻泻水天长。

魁阁倒影
魁汉疏星淡紫云,
阁台楼殿动波成。
倒插铁笔书琼宇,
影澈波寒入镜深。

北圃榴红
北岭风凉动紫炎,
圃峦沉玉碧凝烟。
榴丛怒焰横空展,
红蒸蓝沸烈无边。

杨柳古渡

杨穗新脂淡抹烟,
柳绳垂练大江边。
古来客贾愁无渡,
渡岸绳牵若过猿。

金沙夕照
金粼团簇溯空回,
沙漫江湾老渡帷。
夕焰火腾惊凤羽,
照空横裂四山飞。

玉带峥嵘
玉雕明骑下千山,
带绕云峰滞万鞍。
峥叠岫岚藏寂壑,
嵘成蒸势入幽关。
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PostPosted: 2008-10-17 15:54:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

原来个个都是藏头诗,开始读得自然,还没注意到。
感觉到兄弟近来的古诗在韵律上有长足进展。
问好。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-31 03:14:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

野航 wrote:
原来个个都是藏头诗,开始读得自然,还没注意到。
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浪子问好野航兄。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-31 03:53:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

八首藏头写景诗,自然流畅,清新形象.欣赏.
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PostPosted: 2008-12-31 04:15:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

一组很好写景藏头诗。拜读,问好!新年快乐!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-31 08:00:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

浪子兄弟新年快乐!一切顺利.财运桃花运一起走.
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PostPosted: 2008-12-31 09:15:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

巧家八景,尽收眼底。

读《金沙夕照》,倍感亲切。以前,我因开会之便去过金沙江险狭处,那飞瀑咆哮奔腾,喷珠溅玉一般地随心所欲,给我留下了深刻的印象。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-31 22:41:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
八首藏头写景诗,自然流畅,清新形象.欣赏.


浪子问好黄老!新年快乐!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-31 22:42:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

野航 wrote:
浪子兄弟新年快乐!一切顺利.财运桃花运一起走.


野航兄新年快乐!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-31 22:43:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
巧家八景,尽收眼底。
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浪子问好冰清兄!祝冰清兄新年快乐!来年一切顺利!
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