qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2008-11-13 15:09:24 Post subject: 七律 汉高祖 |
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七律 汉高祖
君王自古无情义,冷血狮心夺帝极。
高祖阵前能舍父,霸王垓下难别姬。
未央宫内擒名将,鸿宴席间走劲敌。
高唱大风威海内,岂知后代被人欺。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-11-13 17:42:40 Post subject: |
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未央宫内擒名将,鸿宴席间走劲敌。
越写越有味 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2008-11-13 18:25:30 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
未央宫内擒名将,鸿宴席间走劲敌。
越写越有味 |
谢白水兄雅评! |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2008-11-14 07:12:53 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
七律 汉高祖
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高唱大风威海内,岂知后代被人欺。
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掷地金声! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2008-11-14 08:13:02 Post subject: |
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谢冰清老师赏读. |
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采菊东篱 童生
Joined: 28 Jul 2007 Posts: 21 Location: Toronto 采菊东篱Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-21 02:49:34 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
七律 汉高祖
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和庆宏 七律 《汉高祖》 - 《孰为英雄?》
君王岂有思情义?罔地欺天孽造极。
万古英雄念霸主,千秋烈女颂虞姬。
是非应作当今解,成败休将假想敌。
忧望故园愚鲁众,官书照阅被人欺。
附:梅兰复庆宏诗
君王本来有情义,冷血狮心为伟业。
舍义别姬本难为,取舍之间作抉择。
智慧谋略全用上,英雄本色留后代。
英雄毕竟非神仙,后代被欺有它因。 _________________ 不以物喜 不以己悲
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-12-21 02:56:37 Post subject: |
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欣赏. |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2008-12-22 19:23:15 Post subject: |
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采菊东篱 wrote: |
qinghongh wrote: |
七律 汉高祖
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和庆宏 七律 《汉高祖》 - 《孰为英雄?》
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唱和都妙, 学习了。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2008-12-23 08:22:38 Post subject: |
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谢谢秋兄! |
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