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长睡为何不醒?
冰清
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PostPosted: 2008-12-22 13:22:14    Post subject: 长睡为何不醒? Reply with quote

鹧鸪天
为ji 阴生而作

寂寞难当雨夜昏,
那堪门巷木森森。
因开帘庑清污渍,
却见仙几对镜吟。

声颤颤,意殷殷。
萋眯且是素弦频:
寒冬过去云儿了,
别惹相思锁兴门。

* 阴阳之隔, 不知是他想我, 还是我在想他.
(作于2007年)


西江月
为ji 阴生而作
(作于中国农历戊子年十一月廿四)

忆起卿卿岁月,
樁樁心事难宁。
霞光漫兴赫曦台,
长岛静涵皇英。

雨打芭蕉心动,
风和日暖知情。
万般思意从头说,
长睡为何不醒?

注:(1)赫曦台为岳麓山主峰的别称.(2)长岛又名橘子洲和水陆洲,居湘水之中,因其南北长近10公里得名.唐时产桔已负盛名,宋为潇湘八景之一. 相传上古尧帝二女---皇英,因舜崩投湘水而成湘水之神.
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PostPosted: 2008-12-22 16:55:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

情真意切,感人之作。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-22 17:42:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

感人之作. 冰清老师, 多保重
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PostPosted: 2008-12-22 19:07:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
鹧鸪天
为ji 阴生而作

寂寞难当雨夜昏,
那堪门巷木森森。
因开帘庑清污渍,
却见仙几对镜吟。
声颤颤,意殷殷。
萋眯且是素弦频:
寒冬过去云儿了,
别惹相思锁兴门。

* 阴阳之隔, 不知是他想我, 还是我在想他.
(作于2007年)


西江月
为ji 阴生而作
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感人之作, 问好冰清老师。
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2008-12-23 05:34:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢楼上三位斑斑!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-23 08:21:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

的确非常感人!冰清老师多保重!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-23 23:44:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清老师真情时露,感人!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-30 19:47:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

情真意笃,感人至深.问好冰清!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-31 03:17:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

雨打芭蕉心动,
风和日暖知情。

好句!浪子问好!
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2008-12-31 09:26:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢qinghongh、袖袖、黄兄、浪子。

祝新年快乐吉祥!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-31 09:37:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

金沙浪子 wrote:
雨打芭蕉心动,
风和日暖知情。

好句!浪子问好!


金沙浪子,您那《满庭芳》"诸般事,都轻放起惟共水天长",何等感人。我收藏了。


满庭芳·相话中秋(予妻) /金沙浪子


宿露零秋,北窗松老,一夜黍粒添香。

堪惊凉月,万里放银茫。

得聚妻儿幼老,欢谑里,笑语同堂。  

开怀饮,窖藏醇烈,兴尽《满庭芳》。


清光。     

如水泻,琴声筝韵,百叠萦肠。

执手相温语,一醉重廊。  

岁岁清凉桂影,多圆缺,皆付流觞。

诸般事,都轻放起,惟共水天长。
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PostPosted: 2010-05-06 23:05:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

此詩實在太感人,
死者泉下都知恩.

此詩能寫因情深,
沒愛心人怎唱吟.
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PostPosted: 2010-05-06 23:39:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

情真意切,感人至深!

问好冰清老师!
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PostPosted: 2010-05-08 08:49:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

空堂坐相忆,苦味实难当。谢谢sfiawong、笑聊来访!
每逢清明和ji忌日,我的心都没法宁静。总要写下这样一些心情:


清明

日去三千含泪饮
夕岚生处听泉音
谁谁听懂私心话
还是比肩心上人
注:生处, 指转生之处.
(04/17/2009)


又是清明

请让我停在你这儿
再摸摸你腮上,一滴滴
血红,和湿

要不是青松天天陪伴着你
远远给我捎来你的情况
我还真不知道
你为我哭泣

其实,世道变了
人也在变
隔年黄历不能翻啊
---你,这又何必!
(作于庚寅年清明前夕)


沁园春•遗像前
--- 作于ji逝世八周年纪念日
(17/04/2009)

五十年间,事事相然,念念不忘。
记麓山细雨,青梅同赏;
殷殷喋嗫,暮曲晨光。
放眼星城,金霞闪烁,
好是蝶儿揽若芳。
须晴日,待双飞燕昵,琴瑟兰房。

流光,误染鬓霜。
又岂料低回世道旁。
幸情怀不老,胸罗万象;
清泉细石,桃李甜香。
淡饭粗茶,一双儿女,
尔雅天然底里藏。
今何憾,只嶙峋瘦骨,谁与掂量!
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PostPosted: 2010-05-08 15:47:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

读冰清老师大作,鼻酸喉哽,感人十分!如:
隔年黄历不能翻啊
---你,这又何必!

真不该回答你“我是苦命”
再苦再痛也应笑

今何憾,只嶙峋瘦骨,谁与掂量!

望老师保重!
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