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				|  发表于: 2008-12-17 11:30:37    发表主题: 微风扫过青印溪 - 沈河 |   |  
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				| (诗人沈河英年早逝,译其旧作一首,以寄哀思。) 
 Breeze blows over Green Dappled Stream
 By Shen He
 Tr. Lake
 
 Settle down. Even rough wrinkles become
 smooth when a gentle breeze blows over.
 By the bank, I’m becalmed, fame and gain
 disappear from my mind, noises no more.
 Before a farmer fetches water, I dip my feet in.
 Fish swim over, jumping from my palm to veins,
 then upstream. At this moment, whispers cease
 from Green Dappled Stream's lips and tongue,
 because of my presence and my foot in the water.
 An unknown bird, wittingly, treads
 its little feet softly over the surface of the water
 like an adult gently tickling a child's armpit
 with his forefinger; water splashes and sprays with
 a burst of giggles. Not only do I see the laughter
 but I hear the sound of Green Dappled Stream.
 
 
 微风扫过青印溪
 沈河
 
 静下来。仅要微风扫过
 粗糙的皱纹也会平整。在岸边
 我静下来,心中的名利
 收敛了,不再吵吵闹闹
 我在农人挑水前,轻轻把脚放入水中
 鱼儿游来,从掌心跳到我的血管,逆流而上
 此时,青印溪的私语
 停在唇舌间,因为我在这里
 以及伸进一只脚
 一只不知名的小鸟是故意的
 小脚轻轻地踩过河面
 像大人的食指悄悄伸进孩子的腋窝
 发出的笑由水花一一表现
 我不仅看到笑,还听到青印溪的声音
 
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 the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins
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				| 细腻的描写,生动的比喻;情景的交融,美丽的诱惑。 _________________
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