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《衰老的太阳》
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PostPosted: 2008-12-14 00:43:51    Post subject: 《衰老的太阳》 Reply with quote
《衰老的太阳》

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母亲白发后弓起的脊梁
撑不起塌腰的老房
手握思绪般的柴火
映红辛酸的菜坛含泪的水缸
一轮衰老的太阳又被点亮
吃过倒计的粗茶淡饭
父亲这只跛脚的头羊
带上与他骨质一起增生起来的羊群
朝着六十年没品出甜味的土地蹒跚
渐行渐远的鞭影
把日子一遍一遍地抽响
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PostPosted: 2008-12-14 04:49:42    Post subject: Reply with quote
父亲这只跛脚的头羊
带上与他骨质一起增生起来的羊群
朝着六十年没品出甜味的土地蹒跚
渐行渐远的鞭影
把日子一遍一遍地抽响

后段不错~
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PostPosted: 2008-12-14 17:29:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
半溪明月 wrote:
父亲这只跛脚的头羊
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比较感动。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-15 16:31:12    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好明月，沙漠二位朋友，谢谢来读。多批多批！
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PostPosted: 2008-12-15 18:31:55    Post subject: Reply with quote
感动，那么细腻的感情。问好诗友。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-15 19:08:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
母亲白发后弓起的脊梁
撑不起塌腰的老房

很吸引人的开头
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PostPosted: 2008-12-16 19:37:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
邹崧蔚 wrote:
感动，那么细腻的感情。问好诗友。


谢谢来读，问候你我的朋友！
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PostPosted: 2008-12-16 19:39:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
母亲白发后弓起的脊梁
撑不起塌腰的老房

很吸引人的开头


问好白水，谢谢来读。多批评。
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