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五律和流年粉黛（五）

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Posted: 2008-12-15 08:34:37 Post subject: 五律和流年粉黛（五）

五律和流年粉黛（五）秉烛恨短夜，风雨读春秋。窗外黄花瘦，池中荷叶羞。落花溪水续，旭日霞光流。掩卷难开口，掷书在案头。流年粉黛原玉：别时皆短夜，见处尽三秋。怎奈黄花瘦，不如枫叶羞。深情寻雁续，哀怨倚琴流。饮就兰香口，熏风扑上头。

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Posted: 2008-12-15 14:18:54 Post subject:

拜读一个

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Posted: 2008-12-15 14:25:51 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

拜读一个

谢白水兄！我在和粉黛MM捉迷藏。

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Posted: 2008-12-15 15:30:32 Post subject:

它是猫，　你捉不过它的

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Posted: 2008-12-15 16:44:02 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

它是猫，　你捉不过它的 Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-12-15 17:09:54 Post subject:

袖袖MM灌水卖假酒，该罚！

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Posted: 2008-12-15 17:16:59 Post subject:

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各位观众，如果您看到的是红叉叉，那么这个位置应该是——

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Posted: 2008-12-16 10:08:10 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

五律和流年粉黛（五）

秉烛恨短夜，风雨读春秋。
窗外黄花瘦，池中荷叶羞。
落花溪水续，旭日霞光流。
掩卷难开口，掷书在案头。

流年粉黛原玉：

别时皆短夜，见处尽三秋。
怎奈黄花瘦，不如枫叶羞。
深情寻雁续，哀怨倚琴流。
饮就兰香口，熏风扑上头。

唱和俱佳，庆宏兄大作是越来越有味了。

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Posted: 2008-12-16 14:54:56 Post subject:

谢秋兄赏读及鼓励。

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Posted: 2008-12-16 15:45:36 Post subject:

秉烛恨短夜,风雨读春秋. 庆宏君诗味浓郁! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2008-12-16 18:19:05 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

秉烛恨短夜,风雨读春秋. 庆宏君诗味浓郁!

谢白云兄赏读！

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Posted: 2008-12-20 05:54:33 Post subject:

窗外黄花瘦，池中荷叶羞。 _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

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Posted: 2008-12-20 20:44:09 Post subject:

连南河 wrote:

窗外黄花瘦，
池中荷叶羞。

谢连兄赏读。

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