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我究竟能用什么方法把你看清

戴永良
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Posted: 2008-12-15 14:45:36 Post subject: 我究竟能用什么方法把你看清

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Posted: 2008-12-15 15:26:14 Post subject:

这首到是真可以稍凝炼点，溜了

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Posted: 2008-12-15 18:36:23 Post subject:

同感. _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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