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七绝－印地安河初晨

秋叶
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Posted: 2008-12-13 10:18:51 Post subject: 七绝－印地安河初晨

七绝－印地安河初晨河湾寂静睡渔舟，薄雾轻飘古渡头。蛙鼓虫鸣谐远近，朦胧树影枕清流。和－读去声该诗是为我们今年夏天到米湖渡假钓鱼时摄的一幅影照而题，印地安河是流入米湖的一条河流，我们当时早上五点多起来拍照，其中有一幅是照河湾码头的，很有诗意，题之以引玉，请斧正。

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Posted: 2008-12-13 11:49:08 Post subject:

河湾寂静睡渔舟，薄雾轻飘古渡头。蛙鼓虫鸣谐远近，朦胧树影枕清流。好一幅世外桃源仙境图画！

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Posted: 2008-12-13 18:18:32 Post subject:

"朦胧树影枕清流",移情于景,"枕"字传神,妙句! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2008-12-14 04:32:46 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

七绝－印地安河初晨
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睡飘和枕把自然景物写活了，欣赏！

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Posted: 2008-12-14 06:48:07 Post subject:

意境清幽. _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

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Posted: 2008-12-14 16:27:42 Post subject:

哈, 秋香MM好潇洒, 有鱼吃怎么不叫我? 谗死了

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Posted: 2008-12-15 06:21:39 Post subject:

诗情睡渔舟,画意古渡头.万籁谐远近,恬淡枕清流. 活灵活现的诗情画意! 好! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2008-12-15 15:32:55 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

河湾寂静睡渔舟，薄雾轻飘古渡头。
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庆宏兄，您没有去成，确是遗憾啊。

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Posted: 2008-12-15 15:35:38 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

"朦胧树影枕清流",移情于景,"枕"字传神,妙句!

过奖了，谢谢黄老师。问好！

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Posted: 2008-12-15 15:37:34 Post subject:

老山 wrote:

秋叶 wrote:

七绝－印地安河初晨
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睡飘和枕把自然景物写活了，欣赏！

谢谢老山兄赏读。

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Posted: 2008-12-15 15:39:24 Post subject:

野航 wrote:

意境清幽.

野航状元兄，等您的砖头呢。

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Posted: 2008-12-15 15:40:17 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

哈, 秋香MM好潇洒, 有鱼吃怎么不叫我? 谗死了 Razz

等着吧

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Posted: 2008-12-15 15:43:48 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

诗情睡渔舟,画意古渡头.万籁和远近,恬淡枕清流. 活灵活现的诗情画意! 好!

谢谢白云兄，有人说我的这些敝作没有政治意义，我正在检讨呢。

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Posted: 2008-12-15 16:39:29 Post subject:

偷来的：） _________________

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Posted: 2008-12-16 06:26:03 Post subject:

谢谢白云兄，有人说我的这些敝作没有政治意义，我正在检讨呢。 * * * 在尘世里,希望的是诗情画意之美好生活! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2008-12-16 09:32:28 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

偷来的：）

袖MM，我的照片可没有这么恐怖呢，有空贴出讨教javascript:emoticon(' thanks

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Posted: 2008-12-23 23:57:05 Post subject:

歪不正 wrote:

钓一鱼儿便弃舟，众生惊喜挂眉头。
横陈桌上鳞腥近，颇惹馋猫口水流。

Laughing

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Posted: 2008-12-24 11:52:29 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

歪不正 wrote:

钓一鱼儿便弃舟，众生惊喜挂眉头。
横陈桌上鳞腥近，颇惹馋猫口水流。

Laughing

谢谢和作，不止是猫，其美味令我到今天还口水流呢 Laughing

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