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情人（转帖）

韩少君
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Posted: 2008-12-03 19:27:27 Post subject: 情人（转帖）

情人明斯克这条线短路了打出火花老二把克丝钳子拿过来我们相遇在化油器里滤清器必须清洗再换一套火花塞我们相遇在油门线里在迈速表里躲都躲不开还有比这更窄的路就像车祸我们相撞或追尾都粉身碎骨从倒车镜里你会看到那些被更换的原配的部件显得多么伤心明斯克：四平市一汽修厂老板。钱没少挣，养了一群女人。唯一的积蓄是手下的几个高徒。口头禅----报废！看书写诗不加入任何文学组织。信任胡锦涛，拥护温家宝。但对四平市委市政府却抱有极大怀疑。（不愿公开姓名） _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2008-12-03 19:44:01 Post subject:

更晕三鹿奶粉真不少

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Posted: 2008-12-03 22:04:47 Post subject:

哈哈，问好明斯克！好隐晦的文字！意义深远！支持一下！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

韩少君
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Posted: 2008-12-05 14:43:05 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

更晕
三鹿奶粉真不少
Very Happy

我想这是明斯克瞬间的情绪。他说，每当把原配部件拆卸下来的时候，就会想到情人这个题目。每当看到线系统短路的时候，看到发生车祸（相撞或追尾）的时候，都会想起情人这个题目。我说好感觉。就拿来给他发表了。
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Posted: 2008-12-05 14:48:48 Post subject:

娇娇 wrote:

哈哈，问好明斯克！好隐晦的文字！意义深远！支持一下！

其实也不隐晦
只是我们不习惯的表现手法因为诗歌里没有人更没有情人

象征主义？其实就是汉语修辞的隐喻和拟人。我想。谢谢娇娇回帖。哪天我让明斯克请你看修理汽车，他可是好手啊！
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Posted: 2008-12-05 17:33:25 Post subject:

诗好！简介有趣！问好！ _________________ 是金子也会花光地

韩少君
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Posted: 2008-12-06 19:34:19 Post subject: xie

谢刘浪回复。诗歌还要以文本为主。其他次之。我贴明斯克主要是要他的生活经验。经验是诗歌能够或者尽量区别于他人的表达方式之一。雷同的泛泛的哲理抒情描写叙事太多了！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2008-12-06 22:31:38 Post subject:

有特点。想起了自己早先写过的一个，焊丝，电容，面包板，花花绿绿的电阻。。。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-12-07 22:54:30 Post subject:

好诗。 _________________ 我不是树上的黑木耳，我被爱过不能随随便便不回家 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236932795

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