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虚掩的门

刘华明
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Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 75

刘华明Collection

Posted: 2008-11-29 06:25:32 Post subject: 虚掩的门

是指纹泄露了这扇门的秘密茶杯渐凉一截烟蒂还说着半明半暗的话语一定是剧情刚刚上演就被风草草吹散一定是灵魂回归肉体遭遇恶意拦截练过瑜珈的不仅是把梦送来又扛走的黑衣人还有时光撞在墙壁上的回声无法听到夜色在乌鸦的肩上飞来飞去一扇虚掩的门让我预测了生和死的距离把门关上九月菊的灯光亮了起来一些事物慢慢安静恢复了本来的面目

杨海军
进士出身

Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
杨海军Collection

Posted: 2008-11-29 13:15:37 Post subject:

这首诗不错。给人眼亮/祝好 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2008-11-29 19:34:18 Post subject:

一些事物慢慢安静恢复了本来的面目

韩少君
进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
韩少君Collection

Posted: 2008-11-29 20:35:18 Post subject:

好久未见欣赏！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

半溪明月Collection

Posted: 2008-11-30 04:23:24 Post subject:

一些事物慢慢安静恢复了本来的面目欣赏！

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