莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-11-21 21:04:30 Post subject: 虞美人—偶感(新韵) |
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晓风入袖霜浓厚,残菊今消瘦。
晨闻怨语叹闲愁,泪诉寒冬孤独岁难留。
任凭四季更新去,抛弃伤红句。
轻盈走笔付华年,淡墨行文书尽自强篇。
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2008-11-22 03:05:29 Post subject: |
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| 莹雪MM自强不息,令人佩服。 |
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游向高原的鱼 秀才
Joined: 20 May 2007 Posts: 382
游向高原的鱼Collection |
Posted: 2008-11-22 04:28:03 Post subject: |
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问好莹雪。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子,在其中认识自己。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-11-22 14:15:21 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
| 莹雪MM自强不息,令人佩服。 |
谢谢qinghongGG鼓励!我一定继续努力。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-11-22 14:16:08 Post subject: |
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问好好友。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2008-11-25 15:39:25 Post subject: |
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[quote="莹雪"][b][size=16][color=green]晓风入袖霜浓厚,残菊今消瘦。
晨闻怨语叹闲愁,泪诉寒冬孤独岁难留。
任凭四季更新去,抛弃伤红句。
轻盈走笔付华年,淡墨行文书尽自强篇。
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好词! "淡墨行文书尽自强篇"佳句!
问好莹雪! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-11-25 20:33:44 Post subject: |
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| 白云闲人 wrote: |
好词! "淡墨行文书尽自强篇"佳句!
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谢谢点评和关注! |
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又一方天 秀才

Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 385
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Posted: 2008-11-28 23:45:15 Post subject: |
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问好莹雪,勤奋有加,欣赏佳作。 _________________ 空钩久垂
钓得
烟波月醉 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-11-29 14:14:04 Post subject: |
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| 又一方天 wrote: |
| 问好莹雪,勤奋有加,欣赏佳作。 |
问好又一方天,谢谢关注,一定继续。 |
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bannong 童生
Joined: 16 Jul 2007 Posts: 44
bannongCollection |
Posted: 2008-11-29 15:17:00 Post subject: |
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| 抛弃伤红句 |
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