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原创《我是撕裂人世的一道伤口》
低处的迷雾
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PostPosted: 2007-02-13 01:41:30    Post subject: 原创《我是撕裂人世的一道伤口》 Reply with quote

《我是撕裂人世的一道伤口》

文低处的迷雾

雪和冰挨在一起的的香气
产生着高潮
我要被缠咬出多少血水
才能挣破宿命的荒凉
才能看见自己的课堂返回着良药和珍珠

脱光的月亮
裸奔在陡峭的黑夜
许多花滑了下来
捉摸不定的斜坡
把我隔在灯火塌陷的针芒里
纯粹的破碎坠落着沙石
把我的命硌出了血

腥气抹掉的花园是剪不开的疼痛
昏厥的岸土有欠人性
我被自身的碎叶掖进黑暗里
如此绝望的经历滴着砒霜
歇斯底里的异味被生存的高温吸收成
下了毒的日常
我再也拆不开肉体里的坟墓
深埋在那里的绳索灭绝了我爱恋的才能
我心慌意乱地喝水
也洗不掉缠在骨血里的鬼和要命的尖叫
我爱到不会爱了
我的麻木淹死路过的菩萨和天上的父

我是撕裂人世的一道伤口
我是如此地白活
活到一无所有
活到我爱的细节都细成了刺
残酷的意象空出一具僵尸
我嚣张的哭泣声 勒紧的风花雪月
是已被确认的一场虚空
我终于看见了生存就是深出脏和乱的刀痕
也不了解
把自己倒没倒出来
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写诗就是灵魂在私奔。那些风中的道路,我一一痛过的伤口,已被跋涉的脚步止住了腥酸。博客:
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236291191
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-02-13 18:49:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

我终于看见了生存就是深出脏和乱的刀痕
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和平岛
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PostPosted: 2007-02-13 18:56:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

文字用了很多工夫
撕裂之后的重组
所谓语不惊人誓不罢休
Very Happy
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