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今天下午，我们种植了三株玫瑰(外一首)

刘雨萍
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Posted: 2007-02-12 10:00:33 Post subject: 今天下午，我们种植了三株玫瑰(外一首)

今天下午，我们种植了三株玫瑰今天下午，六岁的儿子提议我们种花吧儿童的春天比大人的来的早我们去茶树街那家花圃园里在各色花草的胚芽中挑选还是玫瑰吧。我决定把三株红色，黄色，白色的玫瑰种植在自家的后花园红玫瑰哟你是母亲哺育婴儿时乳汁流畅的旋律浸润了我们渴望成长的嘴唇在岁月的皱褶里，在季节的更迭里你在儿女们越走越远的道路上重复着你爱的理由那株带刺的黄玫瑰哟你是情人们在爱情和冷漠之间激情荡漾的手指绽放了我们青春时期的甜蜜在冬天关闭的花房里，在期艾忧郁的魂里你馥香多瓣的花蕊阐述着每个柔肠寸断的故事最后那株纯洁的白玫瑰哟你是死亡在一个女孩身上无法抵达时踩过水边青草的节奏扩张了她命运的心律在寓意的阳光中，在我虔诚的祈祷中你漂白了一切世俗杂念让纯洁盛开到最后 2/11/2007 厨房里的乡愁我把门敞开德克萨斯州火狐色的夕阳洒满我窗前的灶台揉和着下午菊花茶的清香黄昏的味道是一股味蕾上的乡愁催促我把三根青绿的中国小葱细致地切碎调和在一尾异域他国的淡水鱼里烹饪出一盘家乡的鲜肴虚拟一次与家人的晚餐在想象中舌头游向遥远的长江 2/11/2007 _________________ 隔海抒情

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Posted: 2007-02-12 10:12:40 Post subject:

nice poems one suggestion: 在想象中舌头swimming in the 遥远的长江 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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Posted: 2007-02-12 10:31:19 Post subject:

和平岛 wrote:

nice poems

one suggestion:

在想象中舌头swimming in the 遥远的长江

谢谢斑岛提议.swimming in the 更加动感.接收了. Smile

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Posted: 2007-02-12 18:36:28 Post subject:

喜欢第二首，有情调。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-02-12 19:16:51 Post subject:

刘雨萍
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Posted: 2007-02-13 08:59:43 Post subject:

谢谢杯中冲浪来访. 也谢谢白水及和平兄的玫瑰.逼真地想掐一枝下来. 一并祝情人节快乐. _________________ 隔海抒情

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Posted: 2007-02-15 12:40:45 Post subject:

第二首厚实。提读。

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Posted: 2007-02-16 12:03:43 Post subject:

风动 wrote:

第二首厚实。提读。

谢谢风动阅读. 祝新春愉快.
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