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水杉树长出了诗歌的叶子

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Posted: 2008-11-07 17:47:33 Post subject: 水杉树长出了诗歌的叶子

水杉树长出了诗歌的叶子　　文／笑后提一盏春天的灯来到你家，谁知道你去了远方上锁的门旁遗落一把扫帚指责灰尘的心秋天的想象是否在水杉树的落叶下枯萎落叶的声音只经过一条来过的路蝴蝶的翅膀折断期盼来年春天水杉树长出诗歌的叶子因为曾经你那么的关心我在你家门口黄昏朦胧了我的徘徊夕阳的鱼尾让我安静了些许 2008-10-31 21:18 写于秦淮河 _________________ 廖蕙琳以写悼亡诗而自成一家，一意孤行！

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Posted: 2008-11-07 19:29:12 Post subject:

在你家门口黄昏朦胧了我的徘徊夕阳的鱼尾让我安静了些许结尾处理得含蓄有回味。前两节似可稍做精简。个见。问好！ _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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