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林宗申
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PostPosted: 2008-11-05 03:57:12    Post subject: 媚 惑(组诗)------------------ Reply with quote

媚 惑(组诗)

林宗申

夜 幕

与雨纠缠的你
将伞放在手心上
挥手朝夜色深处离去

单薄的背影
将一场突降的雨
带到心里。它们徒步
千万条神秘的轨迹,无言哭泣

湿润而孤寂的
一场戏,情节扑溯迷离
内心高度抗拒的情绪
拥有隐秘的结局

我想纠葛的夜色
再深一些,梦中的你才能
沉睡一个冬季


媚 惑

疲惫的骨架
走在徜徉的街道旁
灯光染指梦中的摇床

血色的光在心头
荡漾,多美的衣裳。背后的女人
领着你朝前走。一步就
跨过玫瑰的脸庞

很多人,都在昨晚餐桌上
见过。她们现在拿着书
像是握着明惶惶的刀
将我的心搅动

痛是必然的结果
只是无法喊出
媚的诱惑


唇 齿

牙齿之痛,持续
多日。仍然想咬,用疼痛
的牙齿,咬生活臃肿的部分

枯瘦的身体有气
无力。唇中的牙反而更加锃亮
微闭的眼睛,像是老屋的
天窗闪着血腥的光

针药是多余的
当病入膏肓的牙床升起
流亡成为一种习性
牙齿也被放逐

死了后
年轻的牙齿
再无嘴唇的庇护


黑 夜

满屋子漆黑。仿佛
自己也是黑夜的一部分
汹涌的鲜血在体内静静地溶化

一切都可以还原
虚假的面目。房间里的
女人食物和谎言都是多余的
此时,破碎的爱情不必提及

烛光缓缓从手中托起
风吹散我的头发,吹散外面的
步伐和干燥的脚印。我的
咳嗽从窗外传来

一个人最适合
孤独的房间,里面的自己
装满外面的其余







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PostPosted: 2008-11-05 04:25:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

我想纠葛的夜色
再深一些,梦中的你才能
沉睡一个冬季


一个人最适合
孤独的房间,里面的自己
装满外面的其余


许多好句子~欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2008-11-05 05:45:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

颀赏细节的描写。提上
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PostPosted: 2008-11-05 17:34:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

好文笔. 提
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林宗申
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PostPosted: 2008-11-08 04:58:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

秀水 wrote:
颀赏细节的描写。提上


问候,谢谢关注
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