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夜曲三章
上城
进士出身


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Location: 江夏黄鹤楼
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PostPosted: 2008-10-30 21:06:00    Post subject: 夜曲三章 Reply with quote

这颗大脑疲乏
已不再能思想

鸡鸣一声
夜已深

睡意朦胧中
渴望着一觉

搅拌机
彻夜不息

为了有足够的混凝土
覆盖土地

哦,明天
君不见:——

中国的大道
汽车奔驰!






谁不曾睡去
待到黎明

谁永无宁日
醒在轰隆隆的世界

窗外夜色温柔
月光皎洁

我们的树木
影影绰绰

呼啸而过
有一声尖厉

繁星点缀在天空
大山远处静卧

远足
露水打湿衣襟






大道上
扫帚响亮

雄鸡高亢
曙色渐渐升起

农人扛着农锄
踏过窗前

如洞穴里的动物
日复一日

唱着咱们地球上
最古老的歌

当日光盖过灯光
夜无声宵遁

卡车打着哈欠
人们开始大量活动

发动机咕隆隆
我茫然无措

不如黑暗中
完成工作

把灯光熄灭
就立即死去


2008-10-27
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沙漠
秀才


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Location: 中国温州
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PostPosted: 2008-10-31 01:47:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

写实.感觉诗意欠了些.问好!
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