悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-10-30 14:59:11 Post subject: 在秋天里恍惚 |
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菊瘦的迟暮
芭蕉的雨夜
都绵延了这秋的清凉
是否,每一片落叶上
都带着一个
缱绻的叹息
秋意太浓
淡去了光阴流淌的惆怅
在枫林里感动
一场恍然而热烈的告别
如果可以相忘
为什么,我还回首
看那一片迷离的斜阳
和秋风空卷的曲径
和树叶一起冬藏入泥
不要把我夹进书页
做干枯的记忆
10/30/2008 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-10-30 15:13:26 Post subject: |
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叶子也是千百个不愿意啊~ _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-10-30 16:01:18 Post subject: 你又什么时候做了叶脉里的虫儿 |
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詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
叶子也是千百个不愿意啊~ |
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曲元奇 秀才
Joined: 01 Mar 2008 Posts: 427 Location: 山东 曲元奇Collection |
Posted: 2008-10-30 20:21:56 Post subject: |
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【在枫林里感动 一片恍然而热烈的告别】【秋风空卷的曲径】第一次读到的秋的感觉 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-10-31 07:06:11 Post subject: 什么时候!一直都是呢。 |
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悠子 wrote: |
诗盗喜裸评 wrote: |
叶子也是千百个不愿意啊~ |
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_________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2008-11-02 00:53:57 Post subject: |
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和树叶一起冬藏入泥
不要把我夹进书页
做干枯的记忆
>呵呵,把你藏进泥中,等待春天的惊艳,如何? |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-11-03 03:41:48 Post subject: 荷梦老师好!您把悠子藏太深了,大概。 |
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_________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-11-03 05:13:06 Post subject: 很久不见你,先问好, 再藏 |
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红袖添乱 秀才

Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
红袖添乱Collection |
Posted: 2008-11-10 12:15:18 Post subject: |
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在秋天里忽悠 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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点点儿 秀才
Joined: 12 Jan 2008 Posts: 413 Location: 眇小的地球 点点儿Collection |
Posted: 2008-11-10 20:18:57 Post subject: |
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偶慌了,等开春儿涅
悠子冬安。 _________________ ---其实你永远不懂我的心--- |
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