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在秋天里恍惚

悠子
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Posted: 2008-10-30 14:59:11 Post subject: 在秋天里恍惚

菊瘦的迟暮芭蕉的雨夜都绵延了这秋的清凉是否，每一片落叶上都带着一个缱绻的叹息秋意太浓淡去了光阴流淌的惆怅在枫林里感动一场恍然而热烈的告别如果可以相忘为什么，我还回首看那一片迷离的斜阳和秋风空卷的曲径和树叶一起冬藏入泥不要把我夹进书页做干枯的记忆 10/30/2008

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-10-30 15:13:26 Post subject:

叶子也是千百个不愿意啊～ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

悠子
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Posted: 2008-10-30 16:01:18 Post subject: 你又什么时候做了叶脉里的虫儿

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

叶子也是千百个不愿意啊～

曲元奇
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Posted: 2008-10-30 20:21:56 Post subject:

【在枫林里感动一片恍然而热烈的告别】【秋风空卷的曲径】第一次读到的秋的感觉

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-10-31 07:06:11 Post subject: 什么时候！一直都是呢。

悠子 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

叶子也是千百个不愿意啊～

_________________
可情可理，去捧就真

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-11-02 00:53:57 Post subject:

和树叶一起冬藏入泥不要把我夹进书页做干枯的记忆 >呵呵,把你藏进泥中,等待春天的惊艳,如何?

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-11-03 03:41:48 Post subject: 荷梦老师好！您把悠子藏太深了，大概。

荷梦 wrote:

和树叶一起冬藏入泥
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可情可理，去捧就真

悠子
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Posted: 2008-11-03 05:13:06 Post subject: 很久不见你，先问好，再藏

荷梦 wrote:

和树叶一起冬藏入泥
...

红袖添乱
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Posted: 2008-11-10 12:15:18 Post subject:

在秋天里忽悠 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

点点儿
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Posted: 2008-11-10 20:18:57 Post subject:

偶慌了，等开春儿涅悠子冬安。 _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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