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[原创]张三的病（外二首）

庄之谐
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Posted: 2008-10-20 06:37:49 Post subject: [原创]张三的病（外二首）

张三犯病的时候心情烦闷经常打儿子每打一次烦闷都增加一分但就是没法控制自己张三的儿子很懂事咬着嘴唇让他爸爸打不哭也不闹张三的病越来越重儿子也愈加懂事哪天如果没有挨打他倒会痛哭流涕仿佛死了爸爸一样直到做了爷爷的张三这才痊愈健康的心情那叫一个好啊只是每逢儿子打孙子时他就像个小孩子哇哇地哭《烟圈》吐烟圈是一项技术活大的烟圈套着小的烟圈小的烟圈套着更小的烟圈层出不穷，很有意思烟圈被风吹散成了一座彩虹桥禁烟组织对外宣布：今年夏天，天高云淡风和日丽，晴朗少雨总之都是好话很适合烟叶生长《口水》我在打盹时做着匆忙的美梦这个时候口水悄然落下有关口水的问题很多很多但都无关风化我所关心的只是还有什么一起失落 _________________ E-mail:xruup@163.com

赵福治
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Posted: 2008-10-20 17:23:12 Post subject:

每打一次烦闷都增加一分

庄之谐
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Posted: 2008-10-22 02:49:35 Post subject:

谢谢赵兄，问候您！ _________________ E-mail:xruup@163.com

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