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◎十月的母亲

黄刚笔
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Joined: 11 Oct 2008
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Posted: 2008-10-14 04:29:32 Post subject: ◎十月的母亲

◎十月的母亲文/黄刚笔南瓜从藤上掉了下来一群麻雀正忙着垒巢绿过的叶子,听到风声后纷纷躲到了树下母亲从几里外的水田里用生锈的镰刀将稻子拦腰割断均匀地铺在枯萎的谷桩上在干涸的稻田上不停地用袖子抹着汗珠一抬头,整个人都和十月的谷粒浸泡在金色的光芒中眼见,十月就要填满粮仓此时,母亲好象正和风儿说着与季节无关的话

赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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Location: 中国北京
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Posted: 2008-10-14 04:45:55 Post subject:

十月的谷粒浸泡在金色的光芒中

黄刚笔
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Posted: 2008-10-14 05:43:35 Post subject:

谢谢赵老师的点评!

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